John Hamilton Poet Free verse

You Needed Me

You (knee)ded me

For so long, I felt 
so empty and all alone
but, you came along
and you (knee)ded me.
You touched me with
your love, you filled me up
from my head down to my toes
(my belly too, I might add
that was tasty, mmmmm)
My love is complete, 
strong and true,
my arms long to hold you
my fingers too.
I will declare my love to
all your family 
Your Aunt and Ankle too.
Just swear to me that you
love me, cause I (knee)d you too.



John Derek Hamilton
September 13,2016

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Sunita U.D Palawon October 8, 2016 at 12:21 AM Great sense of humor. Well done! :) John Hamilton October 8, 2016 at 7:41 PM Great Thanks Sunita

Jan Allison October 7, 2016 at 5:22 PM Very humerus John - eye loved reading it again:-) hugs jan xx John Hamilton October 8, 2016 at 7:40 PM Right Thanks Jan

Sandra Haight October 7, 2016 at 8:48 AM Fun and creative, John. Congrats on your placement! Sandra John Hamilton October 7, 2016 at 2:23 PM Thanks Sandra

Beautiful Scars October 7, 2016 at 8:01 AM very creative John., love this one...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo John Hamilton October 7, 2016 at 2:23 PM Thanks Laura

Teddy Kimathi October 7, 2016 at 4:40 AM Congrats John, for your placement with this fascinating work!!! ;-) John Hamilton October 7, 2016 at 6:58 AM Thanks Teddy was a fun one!

Viv Wigley October 7, 2016 at 12:28 AM Great little write, John, and thanks for entering my contest. Well done. Regards, Viv John Hamilton October 7, 2016 at 6:58 AM Thanks Viv was a fun one!

Joanna Daniel September 24, 2016 at 8:20 AM This is fun:) all the best for the contest:) John Hamilton October 7, 2016 at 6:58 AM Thanks Jo

Richard Lamoureux September 15, 2016 at 12:43 AM This is a fun one John! John Hamilton September 15, 2016 at 8:45 AM Thanks Richard, I think I confused people because it starts off serious, any way lets see if Viv thinks it's funny

Jan Allison September 14, 2016 at 6:49 PM ha ha ha hilarious John I think this will appeal to Viv's sense of humour he is a very humerus guy:-) hugs Jan xx7 Jan Allison September 17, 2016 at 4:02 PM Well you can guess mine wasn't serious lol:-) hugs Jan xx John Hamilton September 14, 2016 at 10:06 PM Yeah I got that in the instructions but I see so many serious entries I'm second guessing myself now, thanks Jan.

Flower Demon September 13, 2016 at 8:55 PM Beautiful write, also very meaningful loved your work John Hamilton September 14, 2016 at 9:20 AM Thanks for the visit and comment

Nette Onclaud September 13, 2016 at 12:28 PM i'm so liking this, john.. playful, lithe , and so well written!.. lol for ankle!..huggs John Hamilton September 13, 2016 at 1:50 PM Thanks Nette just having fun with words!