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You Know I Did Love You

…on a Sunday morn, against the ever watchful and furtive glances of bird feeders, who enjoy the occasional, yet so gentle breeze; the vibrant façade of this kirk and voices of hummingbirds, in the rays of my morning orb, you suddenly appear before me, with echoes of our yesteryears; your sad, sad face reminds me of happy, happy times that you once etched in my heart; now you came, with desire of wanting me back, I know, for I can feel it as I listen to your whisper to the wind “I still love you!” “Great, just great! You know I did love you, but it is too late now Honey!” my eyes silently answer; …the vibrant façade of this kirk and voices of hummingbirds have already intertwined, with resounding wishes and marching of bird feeders, to part our ways, for eternity.

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Date: 5/20/2011 12:52:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your special poetry with us Ernesto. Have a wonderful weekend and may you find inspiration to continue your writing along the way. Love, Carol
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