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Bright rays of sunlight bathed the strand where children wandered freely on the bay The turquoise oceans caressed the sand and gleamed vividly in sunlight on this day We had a quite romantic stroll hand-in-hand picking seashells as we go down the pathway.
Written: December 26, 2022 Bite Size Poem No.58 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 1/9/2023 12:51:00 AM
I like how you created a soothing image using only your pen and incredible imagination...... Congratulations on your win:-)
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Date: 12/28/2022 8:10:00 AM
Sweetly romantic. Lovely stroll through the seashore.
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Date: 12/27/2022 7:03:00 AM
This is a romantic poem that fills the hearts with the warmest of feelings and makes the snow melt, dearest Lasaad. Be blessed!
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Date: 12/27/2022 6:01:00 AM
Wonderful imagery my friend. I felt every detail on their stroll.
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Date: 12/26/2022 10:58:00 PM
Absolutely Beautiful Lasaad! Debx
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Date: 12/26/2022 8:58:00 PM
hand in hand, heart in heart and soul in soul- there lives a fair pure existence and that is love
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