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You Fell Like October Rain

You fell in October, like autumn leaves Funny it was a hot day. The avocado tree was budding. I knew you only a short while, But it broke me to see your mother cry. She was inconsolable. And I thought I was strong, But my tears could not be kept at bay. Your friends gathered by your side, Oh what love they had for you. Your lover had mourned all he could, He was the strongest, Not one tear. They built you a house in the ground, So they said. They built you a bed, never to rise So I said. And in love they gathered around you. And laid you in it. That was the hardest, Interred you in red loam. And this was the finality, Who would have known? That your laughter would be so short, Thirty and one years?. They said we had to embrace death. Even come to love and desire it. He visits one and all. His cynical finality. It was hot and sunny today, But you fell like October rain. When heaven heaved in storm clouds, As they entrenched you underground.
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Jones Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 7:37 AM
Wow! Your grief has inspired such a work of beauty. So sorry you lost a loved one at any age but thirty one is tragic! You are a uniquely talented person and I enjoy reading your work!
Mo Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 8:03 AM
Thanks much. Blessings
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 9:45 AM
Wow. Such a heartfelt poignant poem for this person who died so young. My brother too died around that age
Mo Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 12:17 AM
Oh sorry about your brother and thanks for the visit
White Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 11:50 AM
Absolutely breathtaking and beautiful Mr Mo. sorry for your loss, Kelli
Mo Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 4:18 PM
Thanks for your visit my friend
May Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 4:49 AM
The loss of a loved one leave us with heavy hearts, A poignant write, Well penned Mo, a fave
Mo Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 11:08 AM
Thanks Joseph!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 8:24 AM
What a powerful write. So sorry. Pain can last a long time. Good memories are the best kind.... Have a blessed day writing away......................
Mo Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 11:07 AM
Thanks Paula. Blessings
Baker Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 4:41 PM
I like the way you brought out the emotions through this one, Marugu. To die young is always a shock to those who are left behind. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
Mo Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 11:06 AM
Thanks Bill!
Empress Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 10:38 AM
This made me tear up, sometimes the most special ones leave us, early, as they belong in heaven they say, touching and poignant write so well woven in such a metaphorical manner dear marugo, i felt so much reading this especially the ending! Hits strong! Reminds me of my bestfriend that i lost so young, sigh Pleasure always reading your work, sending you light
Mo Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 2:22 AM
It was heart wrenching. I appreciate your visit and your wonderful comment. Light and love
Buhagiar Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 2:45 AM
This is a magnificent poem. I have been evading funerals these days, but not for long. Thank you for your poem.
Mo Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 2:20 AM
Thanks Victor. Find peace my friend
Sands Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 8:08 AM
Wow . A very powerful poem. I can feel it. Well written and expressed !
Mo Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 11:32 PM
Thanks Heidi
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 6:48 AM
- Death came far too soon...no one will embrace death until they have lived life to the fullest - A heartbreaking poem, Marugu - hugs
Mo Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 11:33 PM
Yes it did. Thanks for the read Anne-Lise
One Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 6:03 AM
Great use of analogy and metaphor..
Mo Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 11:33 PM
Thanks SO
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