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You Did This

Everlasting vehicles only last so long Broken glass bottles never did belong Pews of people lined in churches Yards of concrete roads God did never grant us what were living on. Blamelessly waiting for a story Shameful hunts for another mans glory Grains of sand in hour glasses Tension between friends Now I live for what I want instead of living for me. Soot being swallowed just trying to gasp for air Hungry children walk alone just need a mother to comb their hair People living without shoes Others live for extras It’s what man kind made of life that is claimed to be unfair

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/30/2010 4:52:00 AM

Hi Kelsi, I didn't want this week to pass without congratulating you on having your well-written heartfelt poem featured this week. It was an enjoyable to read and brought silence to my heart as I remembered the tragedy in Hatti. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Lovingly, Dane

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/27/2010 3:43:00 AM

Congratulations Kelsi, on having your insightful poem featured this week. It was meaningful to read. Thanks for sharing. Lovingly, Dane

Janette Fisher

Date: 1/25/2010 10:50:00 AM

Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/25/2010 8:45:00 AM

Kelsi, Congratulations on having your heartfelt poem featured this week! Love, Carolyn

Date: 1/24/2010 3:14:00 PM

Thought provoking poem with a lot for the reader to reflect on. Congratulation on having it featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

James Fraser

Date: 1/24/2010 2:14:00 PM

Many congratulations in you deserved featured poem this week >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/24/2010 1:50:00 PM

Congratulations are your well deserved featured poem this week Kelsi. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/23/2009 3:30:00 AM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor Kelsi and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 12/21/2009 9:34:00 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/20/2009 1:56:00 PM

Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Kelsi! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 12/20/2009 11:47:00 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 5/15/2009 3:42:00 PM

Ttruly captivating.