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You Complete Me

MY EYES LOOK FOR YOU MY HEART BLEEDS THE TRUTH MY SPIRIT ENTERS YOUR SOUL COMPLETELY My simple truth speaks my love for you Of my unflinching devotion I thirst for the signs of tenderness Your smile directed my way The gentle touch of your hand Each word of endearment from you Every opportunity for our hearts To mesh and intertwine in harmony My life craves affection and interplay My soul in sultry dance summons its mate BY DOING THE ABOVE REACHING UP YOU COMPLETE ME AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Collaboration with James Edward Lee Sr Submitted on March 4, 2019 for contest YOU COMPLETE ME sponsored by JAMES EDWARD LEE SR - RANKED 1ST

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/28/2019 12:18:00 PM

Super work. Way to go. Congrats on your winning work. Sara

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/28/2019 4:31:00 PM

Thank you, Sara, for your much appreciated visit and compliment.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 3/28/2019 8:43:00 AM

Congratulations, Line on your win. Great take on the theme.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/28/2019 8:48:00 AM

Thank you, Subimal. Much appreciated.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/27/2019 10:11:00 PM

Back with big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/27/2019 11:49:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/19/2019 12:10:00 AM

Line, very well done. I enjoyed reading ... Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve~`*

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/19/2019 12:41:00 AM

Thank you, Eve. Most appreciated.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/11/2019 1:33:00 AM

So! Now You are a complete woman. Congrats.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2019 9:00:00 AM

Thanks, Anisha. Much appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 3/5/2019 6:27:00 PM

Wonderful! Every man years for a love mate like this.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2019 7:00:00 PM

And every woman. Thanks for your visit and comment, Timothy.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/5/2019 3:44:00 AM

Nicely penned. I especially like this part: "My life craves affection and interplay My soul in sultry dance summons its mate". Good luck in the contest, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2019 12:30:00 PM

Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.