You Can Understand

a ghazal

She needs a separation, you can understand,
it involves subjugation, you can understand.

Her boss at work chooses only female colleagues, 
some may be a temptation, you can understand.

On break, his frequent jokes border on harassment, 
it is only flirtation, you can understand.

Often we see him out in public with his wife
in pleasant conversation you can understand.

But when he’s at work, he’s much too touchy-feely; 
it’s not imagination, you can understand.

Quitting her job, she proceeds on to better things;
though he’s the aggravation, you can understand.

Relief is coming to her senses, she proclaims
her self-emancipation, you can understand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/12/2017 11:18:00 AM
Like it. Perhaps all exit interviews with human resources should be in poetic form. Congratulations! :-)
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Date: 2/11/2017 7:42:00 PM
Reason congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write ~
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Date: 2/11/2017 3:56:00 AM
I was so surprised a ghazal form even existed in English (I am used to the form in Arabic), and I am pleased to see your interpretation. It's great, powerful, congratulations :)
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/11/2017 12:44:00 PM
How does the English form compare to the Arabic? It has always fascinated me, the repeat and the rhyme before. I have done only 3 or 4; but have been pleased with the results for the most part. Thanks for your comment. It encourages me to write another.
Date: 2/10/2017 8:40:00 PM
You completed it like a smoothly flowing gazelle. Jim Horn
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/10/2017 9:34:00 PM
Thank you, Jim. Am getting attached to the form; it is built for emphasis and the middle rhyming word is most unique. Appreciate the comment.
Date: 2/8/2017 8:17:00 AM
Congrats, Reason! Great content!
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/8/2017 8:38:00 PM
thank you, Kim. I'm smiling at the placement. Ghazals are a complex write; hard to achieve a flow.
Date: 2/7/2017 8:55:00 AM
Glad it's fiction, Reason:) well written:)
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/8/2017 8:40:00 PM
Thank you, Jo. Appreciate the read and remark.
Date: 2/5/2017 10:11:00 PM
Very glad it's a fictional account and it's a great ghazal. Flows very well. It's a surprisingly difficult form to write in. It's difficult to maintain the reprise without saying the same thing over and over again but you did a super job
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 2/6/2017 7:31:00 AM
Not a cop out at all. It's a wise course of action
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/6/2017 7:01:00 AM
Thank you Phillip. I appreciate the read and encouraging remarks. The theme is current and my solution is not a cop out; it's reality. You can't change people but you can get out of their reach.
Date: 2/5/2017 3:00:00 PM
Yes, I can understand! A great fictional piece that many women can relate to, Reason. This is the second wonderful ghazal I've read from you. Both would be great entries! L&B, Rhonda
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Date: 2/5/2017 6:47:00 PM
thank you, Rhonda, I appreciate the supportive remarks. Wasn't sure about the placement of the rhyming words on The Train.
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