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You Breathe Beside you I lay, listening all night. Afraid, that I might miss... something. What? I can not think, to consider at this time. You are everything, I want. You are everything, I need. God has been kind, to me. He has given me grace, when I deserved nothing, in its place. Now I pray each morning, that our days together are long. I want to go places. I want to walk among the roses, and the trees, and listen to the bees. We are bird nerds, and hummingbird lovers. We talk together about all of it, and take it in... as if we are one. Beside you, I lay, I pray, and pray, don't go away.

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Date: 6/21/2021 5:18:00 AM
You speak of love’s togetherness. I have seen the other side…brokenness. I pray you both have great length of time together, you…lol…bird nerds (love)
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Ann Foster
Date: 6/21/2021 6:51:00 AM
Thank you, friend. My guy was in the hospital... he got home last night. God hears prayers... Have a beautiful day... Ann
Date: 6/20/2021 12:14:00 PM
You express your feelings via your vibrant words, Ann, making this poem not only a tribute to your lover but also a guide to develop good relationships and serve as an example of hope and devotion. Blessings and peace
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Ann Foster
Date: 6/21/2021 6:51:00 AM
You are so kind... You are such a wondeful poet, your words are especially golden and bright... Thankyou.
Date: 6/20/2021 11:08:00 AM
Wonderful tribute to your hubby. May God bless you both with long life full of health and joy. Thanks for adding me to your followers list. I will do the same. Love reading your poems.
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Ann Foster
Date: 6/20/2021 11:39:00 AM
You are ever such a kind friend. Thank you... Ann

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