You Bamboozle Me

I am an abomination
Worthy of your scorn
There can be no affection for one such as I
I will never know your passion
I am left yearning
I struggle to hold onto the possibility of us
My attempt is but a foolish dream
Still I cherish the sound of your voice
I value this bambooziling relationship
The flame of you is engraved on my heart
I taste your scent on my lips
I long for your tender touch
My inner soul crys out
If I receive but one kiss, my heart will fully bloom

Dictionary fun...#1... Dililah's Words  Poetry contest
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Manassian Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 2:39 PM
What an ending line....my mama used the word bamboozle all the time....ah...memories. Reading u before I drift off....good night from this part of the world....
Roberts Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 11:21 AM
Congratulations Richard ...Seren
Lamoureux Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 12:28 PM
Thanks Seren.
Widjanarko Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 9:29 AM
Congrats on your win Richard :D
Lamoureux Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 11:14 AM
Thanks Yanny.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 5:17 AM
Congratulations on your HM Richard xx
Lamoureux Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 5:19 AM
Thanks Mandy
Tsiluma Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 12:11 AM
I love how you delved into heartache Richard - very nice. Well done!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 5:18 AM
Thanks Yvette
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December 10, 2012 at 5:17 AM
Thanks Vicky
Ndlovu Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 11:59 PM
"my heart will fully bloom," touching words. Congrats!
A   Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 1:39 PM
Hello Richard... love the "Dictionary fun" here.... Congratulations (-: always~&~forever :-) PD
Lamoureux Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 2:21 PM
Thanks Linda!
Inka Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 2:11 PM
Wow!! I enjoyed reading this so much. When I got to the end and realized your word choice was confined I was that much more impressed. Well done
Lamoureux Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 2:14 PM
Thanks Joe Appreciate your kind words and you spending time looking through some of my poems.
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 1:50 PM
I love the title of your poem. This poem of a troubled soul seeking the redemptive kiss from his one true love. Excellent write!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 5:30 PM
I had to use all the words for the dictionary contest. Glad you liked it. Bamboozle was a tough one to use in a sentence.
Williams Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 1:01 PM
Richard I like this romantic verse..David
Lamoureux Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 5:33 PM
Thanks David, it was a fun one to write.
Macfarlane Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 11:41 AM
Well done Richard! Filled with emotion and passion! Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 5:30 PM
Thanks Cecillia
Widjanarko Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 9:52 AM
Wow, this is bold and passionate, another masterpiece of different pattern poetry, tremendous Richard, good luck for your contest :D- Hug, Yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 5:31 PM
Thanks Yanny, you are so kind.
Falotico Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 7:27 AM
Touching write my friend... you write with much passion... enjoyed.... Michael
Lamoureux Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 5:32 PM
Thanks Michael, I will drop by and read some of yours.
Ellison Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 5:55 AM
This brings back sweet memories of my first love many many years ago! But Cathie has made me realize, all my life I was just waiting for us to happen. Have a great day, my friend!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 5:34 PM
Jack as always, good to hear from you. I will make my way over to see what you are up to.
Sanderson Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 7:25 PM
A kiss for you Richard, very touching write my best wishes in contest xoxox Carma
Lamoureux Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 5:35 PM
Thanks, always nice to get a kiss.
Adams Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 5:12 PM
beautiful poem my friend...good luck in the contest!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 5:38 PM
Thanks Sandra, I am always happy to acquire some luck. Hope you are having a great weekend.
Andresen Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 4:00 PM
You write with your heart, Richard, well done. - Luck in contest. - Have a lovely weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 4:11 PM
Thanks Anne. Unfortunately no long weekend for us Canadians, mybe I can become an honorary American for the weekend.
La France Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 3:36 PM
Richard, such passion in your write, oh yes, I have felt the yearning of lost love also, had it engraved on my heart, well done. Constance
Lamoureux Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 3:43 PM
My heart ache was from a long time ago but if I allow myself to think about those emotions can fllod back.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 3:40 PM
Thanks Constance, appreciate you stopping by to visit.
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