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You Are the One

When the day was long And the sun too harsh I saw your shadow, but I didn't know You are the one Trekking gingerly along Lending your heart, you brought me cheers Easing my pain, you held back my tears You are the one, who freed me from fears When I was lost In search of a guide You took my hand, and you joined the ride You are the one Who got me across Lending your heart, you brought me cheers Easing my pain, you held back my tears You are the one, who freed me from fears When in my strife And devoid of smile You came to find me in ebullient style You are the one Sweet love of my life When I needed a friend, it was you by my side Wrestling from demons you gave back my life You are the one, who restored my pride Lending your heart, you brought me cheers Easing my pain, you held back my tears You are the one, who freed me from fears You are the one..you are the one You are the one..sweet love of my life April 12, 2020 Poem of the day on April 14, 2020 Placed 2nd: Strand Pick 12 Contest by Brian Strand

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/23/2022 5:48:00 PM

So beautiful! Love the first two lines, the refrain and the love.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/12/2020 12:32:00 PM

I can see with a tune to match this would make a good song ... it definitely has a rhythm when read aloud. Well done.

Funom Makama

Date: 4/30/2020 12:40:00 AM

Sensual, sweet, romantic, tender, soft, polite and refreshing. Wow, just wow!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/30/2020 6:21:00 AM

Much appreciate Funom--many thanks.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/29/2020 5:12:00 PM

so beautifully romantic a wonderful lyric Vijay:-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/30/2020 6:21:00 AM

Thank you Jan--much appreciate.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 4/24/2020 2:43:00 PM

this really has a melody in words you are the one very beautifully painted picture wishing you a blessed weekend

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2020 3:11:00 PM

Thank you Liam--much appreciate.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 4/19/2020 12:40:00 AM

'You are the one'.. a wonderful poem.. I read it late... Great POTD win.. Congrats Vijay..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/19/2020 9:54:00 AM

Many thanks Jenish for the kind feedback--much appreciate.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/18/2020 10:34:00 AM

A return visit for the third time. Stay well and don’t let the isolation get you down. Hugs Eve

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/19/2020 9:53:00 AM

Thank you for the return visits, Eve--much appreciate.

Charles Messina

Date: 4/18/2020 9:13:00 AM

Wonderful poetry, Vijay. An absolute gem! Sorry I missed your POTD so Congrats on that. Keep writing my friend.. Stay well and be safe. All the best.. Charlie

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/19/2020 9:53:00 AM

Much appreciate the kind remarks--many thanks, Charlie.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/17/2020 8:16:00 AM

I enjoyed giving this one another read.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/19/2020 9:52:00 AM

Thank you Richard--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2020 6:31:00 PM

wow, POTD.BIG congrats to you, Vijay!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/17/2020 7:23:00 AM

Thank you for the return visit, Andrea--much appreciate.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/16/2020 3:42:00 PM

Big CONGRATS, Vijay! This is a GREAT poem. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/17/2020 7:22:00 AM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/15/2020 8:17:00 PM

A tremendous piece. I see as well that it was POTD and a contest winner. Congrats!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/17/2020 7:22:00 AM

Thank you Richard--much appreciate.

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/15/2020 2:48:00 PM

Terrific Vijay, I'm sorry I missed this, but belated congratulations twice. especially POTD honors. What a love story...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/17/2020 7:22:00 AM

Much appreciate Charlie--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/15/2020 6:13:00 AM

How fortunate one is when one finds the love of heir life. Hope your keeping well Vijay, xo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/15/2020 2:25:00 PM

Much appreciate my friend--many thanks.

Jc Hawkens

Date: 4/15/2020 3:41:00 AM

Thank you for gracing us with this beautiful poem. It was a wonderfully inspiring read this morning, my friend. Congratulations on a well deserved POTD. JC Hawkens

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/15/2020 2:25:00 PM

Thank you JC--much appreciate.

John Watt

Date: 4/14/2020 11:42:00 PM

Very much enjoyed this tribute to true love, Vijay. Congratulations on POTD!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/15/2020 2:25:00 PM

Thank you John--much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/14/2020 4:14:00 PM

Devotion shines in this romantic poem Vijay. Congratulations on having it honored for POTD! xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/15/2020 2:24:00 PM

So very kind of you Connie--much appreciate--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2020 3:27:00 PM

oh, wait, now I get it. You got POTD after Eve got it!! Ok, got it, Vijay. Sorry I got confused on that!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/15/2020 2:23:00 PM

Thank you for the return visit Andrea--many thanks.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 4/14/2020 1:58:00 PM

So many congrats dear Vijay on your POTD with this beautiful romantic verse, so well deserved my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/15/2020 2:23:00 PM

Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, Ann.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/14/2020 1:55:00 PM

Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. Your thoughts caress the page with beauty and grace. Unconditional Love. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/15/2020 2:22:00 PM

Thank you for the return visit Brandy--much appreciate my friend.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/14/2020 1:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD win. A beautiful write. Your pen was filled with love. Enjoy your day and win...............

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/15/2020 2:22:00 PM

Much appreciate Paula--many thanks.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 4/14/2020 12:55:00 PM

Very Pretty... congratulations Loverboy, well deserved...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/15/2020 2:21:00 PM

Much appreciate Pashang--many thanks.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/14/2020 12:00:00 PM

I am back to congratulate you on Poem of the Day. A beautiful verse and well deserved. Hugs Eve

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/15/2020 2:21:00 PM

Thank you for the return visit Eve--much appreciate.

Constance La France

Date: 4/14/2020 10:36:00 AM

Vijay, congratulations on your POTD with this beautifully penned poem, enjoy the honor _Constance

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/15/2020 2:21:00 PM

Much appreciate, Constance--many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 4/14/2020 9:52:00 AM

You are the one! Congratulations on your POTD honour, dear Vijay! An amazing work worthy of the recognition and acknowledgement! Best regards. God bless you.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/15/2020 2:20:00 PM

Thank you for the return visit, Besma--much appreciate.