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You Are Perfect

You look; our eyes meet and my heart beats fast You speak; it is profound and soothing to the soul You listen; you are ever understanding as my evil spirits fly You care; I can see it in your gorgeous, green eyes You write; the world marvels at your infinite canvas of words We touch; the spinning earth for a moment goes still And when you smile, you wrap my joyous heart in everything that is bright! For you are my night in this new endless light Yes dear; you are perfect in my sight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/23/2012 11:26:00 AM
Perfect poem. Beautifully done, Laura. I liked it very much!!
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Date: 2/5/2012 12:31:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Date: 1/21/2012 9:20:00 PM
does sound like a nice cosy place to be.
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Don Johnson
Date: 1/23/2012 4:05:00 PM
when you are there in the moment, and its perfect yes your slice, and you're as giddy as a cricket, being overwhelmed by lice, just one word will suffice, paradise
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/21/2012 11:24:00 PM
You have no idea :D
Date: 1/20/2012 2:35:00 PM
LOVE SWEET LOVE........NICELY DONE LAURA. oxox love Anne-Lise
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