You Are My Sunshine

spring curtains blow in the street breeze
women's voices in the kitchen sharing
news
and family secrets
I'm under the bed against the wall where they
cant get me
I don't want to be found.
Here I can listen to the house happening
not visible
and they'll forget me
and
talk 
and I can hear things
never said
and all the things that are.
I push my back up against the wall 
my grandfather is singing
you are my sunshine
on the back porch.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mckenzie Avatar
July 4, 2009 at 3:15 PM
Very different I really like your approach Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Laura :)
Kern Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 8:06 AM
I like that a lot very descriptive full of feeling
Joseph Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 7:43 AM
Thank you, one and all.
Christian Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 6:36 AM
congratulations on your poem being featured God bless you from diane
Nimms Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 6:28 AM
This poem packs a punch... Feels very bittersweet. Nice write! Anton *** www.foesofprose.com ***
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 3:07 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Veronica. May you have many more.Love, Carol
Nutter Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 2:41 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured.
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June 29, 2009 at 12:30 AM
I see my childhood in this poem. Congratulations. I have also a featured poem this week. Ernilando
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June 29, 2009 at 12:04 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week VeronicaRgds Brian
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June 13, 2009 at 6:58 AM
Nostalgic view at childhood. Those times were so special. God Bless. Vince
Joseph Avatar
February 5, 2009 at 9:27 AM
Thank you so much.
Richards Avatar
February 5, 2009 at 8:24 AM
Oh my....this took me back to my childhood! Simply perfectly written, as this could have been my family, me, as the child tucked away, listening to the noises of the grown-ups. And yes...You Are My Sunshine was one of the first songs I knew as a child. This is a lovely lovely poem...putting into my favorites! ~ Love, Carrie
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