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You are my love, and I am yours, you're the rudder, and I the oars. I am the arrow; you're the snare and the answer to my prayer; when I take a breath, you're the air. You found me stuck behind closed doors and took me to see foreign shores, revealing a whole world out there. You are my love. We fight battles, but never wars, refereeing games without scores. As burning flames of passion flair forging one heart that two can share, we meld together at our cores. You are my love. (Rondeau) July 26, 2018

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Date: 8/1/2018 7:12:00 PM
Beautiful poem, superb flow! All the best ... CayCay
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/1/2018 7:24:00 PM
Thanks CayCay, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/28/2018 1:14:00 AM
You have made rondeau look very simple, Emile:) superb poem:)
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Date: 7/28/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Jo, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/27/2018 11:22:00 AM
You paint what love is with emotion and experience, Emile!
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Date: 7/27/2018 3:39:00 PM
Thanks Lyric Man, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/27/2018 8:33:00 AM
Very sweet and romantic. Beautiful, Emile.
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Date: 7/27/2018 10:00:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/27/2018 2:09:00 AM
You have style, loved this!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/27/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/26/2018 11:38:00 PM
Rondeau flowing in romance. Best Luck.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/27/2018 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Anisha, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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