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Meditative Ballad
There are five stanzas structured as follows:
x
y - is the first  stanza of four syllables per line both rhyme 
     and both are a kind of refrain
a
R1
R2
a -  this stanza has an ABBA rhyme scheme, but the two middle lines are refrains to be repeated, each line is eight syllables long  
R1
a
a
R2 - the rhyme scheme in the previous stanza is repeated  in the opposite order, the refrains consistently repeat BAAB 
x
R1
a
R2
y  - the x & y lines repeat, like the refrains word for word, the middle line is still eight syllables long and repeats the rhyme from the above stanzas.
y    repeats from the first stanza but in the opposite order 
x  - repeats from the first stanza but in the opposite order. 

you are my friend until the end sometimes the world appears unfair when nothing seems to work for me I'd turn around, and there you'd be and I'd count on you being there when nothing seems to work for me I slowly slip into despair and convinced that no one will care I'd turn around, and there you'd be you are my friend when nothing seems to work for me within this world where friends are rare I'd turn around, and there you'd be until the end until the end you are my friend (Meditative Ballad) 11/19/2021

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Date: 8/9/2022 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A "Wonderful" friendship write. Have a great/blessed day writing away...............
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Date: 8/9/2022 11:16:00 AM
Thank you, Paula, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/9/2022 5:09:00 AM
You have, indeed, a true friend who is with you and for you. A beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/9/2022 8:24:00 AM
Thank you, my friend, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2022 9:24:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, joyously celebrating "International Friendship Day." God bless you.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/9/2022 8:25:00 AM
Thanks, Beata, I appreciate the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/9/2021 7:24:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start till the end. Likewise, a great example for your contest. God bless you.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/10/2021 6:39:00 AM
Thank you, my friend, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 12/3/2021 6:09:00 AM
Beautiful words, Emile, in this day of dog eat dog. We need more lasting friends who support and encourage us in despair and in success. Great form, Great ballad.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/3/2021 7:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/25/2021 5:34:00 AM
This is so beautifully constructed, Emile:) a great example for your contest:)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/25/2021 6:33:00 AM
Thank you, Jo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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