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You Are My Favorite

You are my favorite The mama said to the youngest Not so much in words But in smiles in nods, in gentle pats In her tone of voice The oldest knew he was the non-favorite Each time he saw the mama interact with his brother He felt a little more of himself slip away Slip into a bit of a funk Slip beneath the floor boards You are my favorite The mama tried with the oldest The non-favorite But in a different tone in a non-genuine way She was trying, but it was too little too late They both knew He smiled at her, saving her the heartbreak She had not saved him. He wished it was true, but the heart does not lie And the heart was already wailing Beneath the floorboards

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 3/26/2020 4:54:00 PM
Glad I was an only child-))) Great verse. Rainbow Wishes, Panagiota xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/26/2020 11:28:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I was the oldest of three.
Date: 3/26/2020 10:52:00 AM
Oh this is so sad, but often one child becomes Daddy's favorite and another Mummy's but what is even sadder is when one has been left out. Well penned my friend, Hugs, Jenny.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/26/2020 11:28:00 PM
It is really sad. For sure.
Date: 3/26/2020 8:15:00 AM
Strong poems and good theme Caren. Sadly often true.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/26/2020 11:29:00 PM
So often it is truly even more sad.

Book: Shattered Sighs