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You and I are Earth Our energy gathers and dissipates We are odds on forever entwined The rarity of being utterly compelling Washed away yet still under my nails Over a thousand lifetimes

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Date: 1/8/2025 8:12:00 PM
Reality is Earth. I'm very partial to my planet. Enjoyed your view.
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Date: 1/9/2025 8:22:00 AM
Thanks Hilda, I was imagining soil as I wrote. We used to call that earth. Thanks for your comment - I'm glad you liked the poem x
Date: 1/8/2025 7:31:00 PM
nicely expressed - strong finish
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Date: 1/9/2025 8:20:00 AM
Thanks Mat :)

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