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You lied there that night, the pain you felt was so hard for me, but a brave face was all you made I was there, useless as always. Your hand in mine, I felt so helpless. I could feel your fear as the time wore on, the doctor not helping at all. Hours passed and the pain grew but I was with you, not knowing what to do. I could see you questioning yourself. As if you felt unworthy. I knew better, you were so strong, but I wasn't. Fifteen hours later I could take no more as the fear in you grew and the doctor reached for you. Can't you see somethings wrong! They made me leave and took you. I was so scared but you never knew. I sat waiting for an eternity, then out of the blue, I heard a voice speaking to me. The doctor came from the operating room. He had something in his hand as he walked slowly toward me with concern on his face I stood, numb, and looked in the dish he held. He said the cord was rapped around her shoulder and this, as he glanced at the dish, is what caused the pain, but you were OK. I felt weak as I listened to what he had to say. but, you were OK was all I heard. The nurse soon came, "It's a girl," she said as I looked through the plastic case. So, perfect and beautiful she lay there calm serene, perfect purple fingers and bright red hair. She was you and my eyes filled as I looked at her, at you, my beautiful Babe.
12/23/15

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Date: 3/9/2020 3:09:00 PM
So moving! Panagiota xx
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James Inman
Date: 3/9/2020 3:26:00 PM
Hi Pangiota, thank you for visiting and for your lovely comment.
Date: 3/9/2020 12:25:00 PM
This was indeed a masterpiece. It drew me in and held me.
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James Inman
Date: 3/9/2020 3:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comment Alison.
Date: 1/14/2016 10:54:00 AM
#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/9/2020 3:12:00 PM
I agree with Funom! Totally..,Panagiota xx
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James Inman
Date: 1/14/2016 4:16:00 PM
What a kind thing to say Funom, thank you so much.
Date: 1/3/2016 2:57:00 PM
A heartfelt poem which succeeds in expressing the emotions felt on a complicated childbirth. ~ All the very best for 2016, James! // paul
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James Inman
Date: 1/3/2016 4:48:00 PM
Thank you Paul, and I hope your year is all you wish for it to be.
Date: 1/1/2016 5:19:00 PM
I can't say anything because I want to say too much. You've touched me, in personal ways so let us just move on to celebrating the wee, red headed babe! CayCay
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James Inman
Date: 1/2/2016 9:45:00 AM
Thank you CayCay. She's not so wee anymore but still has beautiful red hair and brown eyes, a rare combination.
Date: 12/31/2015 9:18:00 PM
Another heart-touching gem, James. Thank you for visiting my page so I cpuld find your work! Amazing!! A fav for sure. Always, Laura
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James Inman
Date: 1/2/2016 9:55:00 AM
Laura, thank you for reading mine, you are very kind. I really enjoy your poems, I need to get to your site more often (so many poems to read).
Date: 12/30/2015 2:00:00 PM
Very touched by this write. I'm so glad it all turned out well. The love in the lines is palpable. Wishing you all the best in the New Year. Thanks for your visits to my work.
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James Inman
Date: 12/30/2015 2:21:00 PM
A bit of a scary day, Eileen. Thanks for the comment and I love reading your poems. Happy new year to you.
Date: 12/27/2015 9:07:00 AM
Ralph, I read what you were saying at my blog (thanks so much for going there. You made it go hot!!) Anyway, I came to see if you had tried a sonnet or something new because of what you were mentioning about your muse. May the muse be with you in our new year!!
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James Inman
Date: 12/30/2015 2:18:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I hope to have more time to write in the near future.
Date: 12/26/2015 4:36:00 PM
I had a wonderful Christmas,, thank you for replying to my comment on the bottom. How sweet. LINDA
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Date: 12/25/2015 6:19:00 PM
Hi James, I want to Wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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James Inman
Date: 12/26/2015 1:00:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely sentiment, PD. I hope your Christmas has been wonderful and for the new year my wish for you is happiness, not just the happiness you give to others but true happiness for you.
Date: 12/25/2015 4:42:00 PM
wow, what an incredible story. I am glad it all turned out. Merry Christmas to you this day, my friend.
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James Inman
Date: 12/25/2015 5:11:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. It was scary. Hope your having a great Christmas as well.
Date: 12/24/2015 12:48:00 PM
Beautiful write full of emotions. Glad to hear your wife and your daughter survived. Glory be to God.
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James Inman
Date: 12/24/2015 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Njeri.

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