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Your smile...the essence of a thousand suns Your eyes...the splendor of the changing sea Your lips.....the velvet of a thousand dreams Your hands........the molded form of fantasy Your body..................the source of idolatry Your mind...................the garden of vitality Your touch........the cadence of a symphony Your kiss....................the flavor of eternity YOU….the breath of love that is meant to be Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/19/2014 8:16:00 AM

I have tried to access some of the special fonts and features but my iPad doesn't seem to give me access. Mind you this was your own creativity without any features. You are so creative Eileen.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/18/2014 7:42:00 PM

i love the way you've set this poem up - wonderful job!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/19/2014 1:23:00 AM

Thanks, my sweet. I just like to play around! ;)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/18/2014 3:58:00 PM

eileen, you make me reel... what a nice shape piece as well.. love becomes you.. huggs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/19/2014 1:24:00 AM

To make you reel, makes me so happy!! Thanks lovely...thanks, Nette!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/18/2014 2:12:00 PM

Your hands-the molded form of fantasy is my favourite line of all these enchanting lines..Lovely descrptions dear.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/19/2014 1:25:00 AM

Hello, Gorgeous. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Actually...those are my favorite lines as well. :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/18/2014 9:27:00 AM

I love the shape, it adds to the pieces appeal. If you read just the first words at the beginning of the poem down word and connect with the final line it forms it's own poem as well.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/19/2014 1:25:00 AM

You are so observant, Richard. Thank you....for reading and for posting your thoughts. :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/18/2014 7:26:00 AM

Eileen; This is a hack of a poem. I loved it. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/19/2014 1:26:00 AM

:) Thanks, my sweet Lucilla. I'm glad to hear from you...always a source of joy, you are! Love you!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/18/2014 5:38:00 AM

Very beautiful, Eileen...but that final line in the past tense, is it trying to say something else? or is it my mind playing tricks on me? // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/19/2014 1:27:00 AM

Thanks for the observation, Paul...I did go and change it. I think it reads better this way. I...tend to live in the past, a character trait of melancholy! ;)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/18/2014 2:44:00 AM

Wow Eileen the wholesome love my dear friend well penned! Love it // Upma //

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/19/2014 1:27:00 AM

Thank you, Dr Upma...I'm a dreamer...always was...always will be. Love to you!

Justin Bordner

Date: 7/18/2014 1:35:00 AM

Love has never known a more sweet voice than this, nor a soul more sincere. You, have given Poetry's heart something truly unforgettable Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/19/2014 1:28:00 AM

Awwwwww....how delectably sweet, Justin. You are good for my soul.

Tim Smith

Date: 7/17/2014 11:27:00 PM

Your words.......the thought of ingenuity

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/19/2014 1:29:00 AM

Lovely line, my dear. You are very kind. I love this.