Get Your Premium Membership

You

I stared into the mirror today. I saw you - a needled zealot hovering around my left shoulder; Adolph Hitler dressed in opium-perfumed swatches. You smelled like her. You acted like him. You looked like me. Swastika tall and evenly abhorrent. Syringe-insured yet, never sharp enough to successfully stab outside the 50-point cork. You slithered like a quadroplegic, into my stratum. Pointing and probing a crooked finger - never healing the martyr's wound. A broken grimace leaves me ugly flesh to ponder. Your tentacles: toothless cleavers eclipse black-dilated pupils, servicing our boomeranged arms with dingoed malice - peppermint leaves and peroxide boil as the living corpse cackles. Mussolini removed thirteen quieted quills from his heart shortly before the noose was tied. Into square knots. Into napkin pleats. Into a poet's silence - where our self-induced stupor was dragged upon spiked cobblestones - and for that, my dear Stalin beauty; I sew my spit into vile words - dribbling purposely upon this diseased cotton-swabbed canvas for you and I to clean.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/25/2013 8:32:00 AM
Good morning John, ,CONGRATULATIONS!!! on having your poem Featured on the soups home page. enjoy your coming week. Always & Forever * Linda
Login to Reply
Date: 8/24/2013 6:14:00 PM
John, congratulations, on your featured poem of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~ :-)
Login to Reply
Date: 8/19/2013 12:20:00 PM
wow...powerful words and great images in this piece...congrats on having it featured!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/19/2013 9:09:00 AM
Ah there you are my friend clever writer and intense feeler of words how are you ? Congrats on your wonderful featured poem ! Love you Laura (C gal) :)
Login to Reply
Date: 4/8/2009 11:26:00 AM
powerful...glad i found this read...
Login to Reply
Date: 12/22/2008 6:58:00 AM
Wow John...I missed this the first time! Amazing poem, and deep with truth! Congratulations on being a winner in the contest!! And Happy Holidays to you and yours! ~ Carrie
Login to Reply
Date: 12/22/2008 5:47:00 AM
Congratulations John on your win in Michael's contest. Another intense, amazing well deserved poem, and win. Love, Shar
Login to Reply
Date: 12/22/2008 12:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved 4th Place WIN in Michael's contest. Best, Nigel
Login to Reply
Date: 12/22/2008 12:30:00 AM
Congrats on your deserved success in Michaels' contest John.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments on my postings
Login to Reply
Date: 12/21/2008 8:47:00 PM
John, I have read and re-read this. Metaphorically speaking - a relationship with an uncompromising Russian woman that was hell on earth (Hitler) Betrayal (Mussolini) hung and drug through the cobblestoned street. The Boomeraned arms ( you keep going back only to be chewed up again). I gather the nightmare is over. For your sake - I hope so. Love, Lainie
Login to Reply
Date: 10/6/2008 7:19:00 AM
Well Done John! your angry pen has been weiled a silver bullet, stake, pitch fork and spitoon toward such vileness... and disgusting acts of terrorism... the aforementioned were indeed some of the most ruthless killers that every walked the earth... This is a very power-packed write. I pray that all is well with you my friend and I thank you for sharing the read. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
Login to Reply
Date: 9/26/2008 2:21:00 PM
John I reckon you broke it down as far as it can be broken in this poem - truly amazing as your poetry always is - God Bless
Login to Reply
Date: 9/26/2008 11:56:00 AM
Wow, so much introspection and depth. All your works are completely brilliant. You never pen anything that is less than amazing. Best wishes, Sara:)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/25/2008 10:51:00 AM
John you are so you, filled with wild expression and depth and so cleverly done ugly and all I love it! Well thought out!!! Laura :)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/25/2008 9:45:00 AM
Good one Ezra!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/25/2008 5:01:00 AM
Yikes, I would not want to be on the business end of this poem! Your pointed expressive talents shine black silver in this one - perfect. This is very good, as all of your poetry, always look forward to your poetry, Kristin
Login to Reply
Date: 9/24/2008 8:26:00 PM
HAHAHAHA! I hope she gets it. reminded me of a FRIENDS episode where chandler suggested the name Joseph Stalin as Joey's screen name. The latter considered it, can you believe that??? Nice take on these three former dictators.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs