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Yet I Stayed, Wooed By Nascent Azure Sky

Cheerily blew ocean breeze in beach-park Till fiery tides climbed bouncing giant rock Spurred on by the churning clouds hosting dark As hazy winds ravaged paths on your walk Rattling lashing gust where fishing boats dock. Stranger were we, till blinding storm hit blast Pouring pelting rain on our budding talk, Waddling needlessly in each other's past-- Alas, like summer rain, our amour faded fast! Yet I stayed, wooed by nascent azure sky Charmed anew by rising violet hue Dispersing vestiges of storm gone by Enchanting crowds in periwinkle view As you returned bearing secret you knew Ready for the prize with smile in your eyes Admiring beauty in portrait I drew Starring just you beneath amorous skies Depicted by my hands sporting romantic highs. June 28, 2018

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Valsa George

Date: 4/26/2022 10:09:00 PM

A brief romantic encounter when there was pelting rain and raging storm ! Though it died down soon, came back with a vengeance to be in each others clasp and grasp ! Beautiful .....

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/27/2018 1:36:00 AM

Hi Vijay, it is such an honour and pleasure to read your excellent work. You always take people to the heart o your words. You always paint such powerful images with such expressive words on each line. You are a true wordsmith and this wonderful piece of poetry just proves that point. May your pen ever run gold my friend. Another fave. have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2018 3:01:00 PM

Did this one win a contest. Someone wrote congratulations, so I echo that if you won a contest with it. It would be very well deserved.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/6/2018 3:09:00 PM

No Andrea--it didn't. But I still like what I wrote. Many thanks for asking.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/15/2018 3:22:00 PM

My friend, I bow to your most superior talent! I didn't even attempt this chalenge, but you did and penned a most romantic piece that is so lovely with flawlessly flowing rhymes! WOW! Hugs and love. Pandita

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/30/2018 6:49:00 AM

Thank you my friend..appreciate and value your feedback.

Frances Schiavina

Date: 7/13/2018 9:52:00 AM

Your poetry is so deliciously descriptive if I was an artist I would paint your poems and let my eyes feast on beauty. Congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/30/2018 6:48:00 AM

So kind of you..many thanks Frances.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/5/2018 10:05:00 AM

Spenserian stanzas are not easy to write, Vijay, but you delivered with apparent ease, dealing with a romantic topic that tugs at our imagination. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/5/2018 1:53:00 PM

Thank you Paul...really appreciate your kind feedback.

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/4/2018 11:04:00 AM

Your skill shines in this one Vijay, best wishes...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/5/2018 9:49:00 AM

Thank you Charlie.

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/2/2018 4:51:00 AM

A true lover boy poem... You may not see me often these day but I wish you well always... All the best Vijay...

Arturo Michael
Date: 7/3/2018 8:35:00 AM

I am taking care of a family member and it consumes all my time... But I don't mind... Keep good... Soon I'll be back on the scene...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/2/2018 5:44:00 AM

Thank you Arturo. Yes..I haven't seen your work in a while. Hope all is well.

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/2/2018 4:51:00 AM

Amazing, Vijay. Yes a classic.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/2/2018 5:43:00 AM

Thank you Harry.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/1/2018 4:38:00 PM

Very skillfully written and moving, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/2/2018 5:43:00 AM

Thank you Janice.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/1/2018 9:06:00 AM

ohh, a stirring write which holds me in awe, vijay...your muse is on a roll in the arena of nature and romance!..huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/1/2018 2:23:00 PM

Thank you nette..appreciate the feedback.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/1/2018 8:45:00 AM

I've come for another read . Its softly enchanting. It creates an aura of love and romantic highs. Thanks for sharing, have yourself a beautiful day. Paint with all the colors of your words, and play...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/1/2018 2:23:00 PM

Great advice ...I will try..many thanks Pixie.

Joseph May

Date: 6/30/2018 11:28:00 AM

"After the storm, skies disperse romantic hues...Nicely penned Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2018 3:43:00 PM

Thank you Joseph.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 6/30/2018 3:56:00 AM

So beautiful. Good luck in the contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2018 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Supraja.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2018 8:43:00 PM

a nice one with that romantic tone to it, Vijay. Love the imagery of your title phrase!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2018 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Andrea..appreciate the kind words.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/29/2018 11:16:00 AM

When "summer rain storm" clears away "budding talk"! and lets your "amour fade fast" .. many a beauty rise, portrayed by a talented pen! An amazing write with a gripping imagery! A great joy to read! A sweet journey for the heart and soul. Thank you so much dear Vijay for sharing such a beauty! A FAV and a win for me! The best of luck in the contest. Stay safe and blessed.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2018 7:36:00 AM

I am delighted to read your glowing comments, Besma. You are so kind..many many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/29/2018 10:33:00 AM

Well done Vijay! Good luck in the contest :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2018 7:35:00 AM

Thank you Heidi..Always happy to read your comments.

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/29/2018 8:54:00 AM

Magnificently rendered Vijay...best for a (((BIG))) win my friend...love & light...^WW^

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2018 7:34:00 AM

Thank you WW..appreciate your visit and kind words, as always.

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/29/2018 7:50:00 AM

True to form, you have created yet another very romantic and enchanting poem, Vijay Best for a win, !!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2018 7:34:00 AM

Appreciate the feedback Mike..many thanks, as always.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/29/2018 6:45:00 AM

Mesmerizing stanzas, vividly painted with the brush of inspiration dear friend, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2018 7:33:00 AM

You are so kind my friend, Demetrios..appreciate the feedback..many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/29/2018 5:52:00 AM

I feel the mist of a beautiful poem indeed. Gl in the contest Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2018 7:32:00 AM

Thank you Pixie..appreciate the kind words.

Lyric Man

Date: 6/28/2018 11:04:00 PM

Vijay, how you can write a story that makes sense with all of those rules I read at the bottom is beyond me. But you did and it was exceptional! Deep Respect!!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2018 7:32:00 AM

I find the rules constraining, but like a challenge every now and then..many thanks LM..appreciate the kind feedback.