Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Yet I Stayed, Wooed By Nascent Azure Sky

Cheerily blew ocean breeze in beach-park
Till fiery tides climbed bouncing giant rock
Spurred on by the churning clouds hosting dark
As hazy winds ravaged paths on your walk
Rattling lashing gust where fishing boats dock.
Stranger were we, till blinding storm hit blast
Pouring pelting rain on our budding talk,
Waddling needlessly in each other's past--
Alas, like summer rain, our amour faded fast!

Yet I stayed, wooed by nascent azure sky
Charmed anew by rising violet hue
Dispersing vestiges of storm gone by
Enchanting crowds in periwinkle view
As you returned bearing secret you knew
Ready for the prize with smile in your eyes
Admiring beauty in portrait I drew
Starring just you beneath amorous skies
Depicted by my hands sporting romantic highs.

June 28, 2018

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Valsa George April 26, 2022 at 10:09 PM A brief romantic encounter when there was pelting rain and raging storm ! Though it died down soon, came back with a vengeance to be in each others clasp and grasp ! Beautiful .....

Vladislav Raven October 27, 2018 at 1:36 AM Hi Vijay, it is such an honour and pleasure to read your excellent work. You always take people to the heart o your words. You always paint such powerful images with such expressive words on each line. You are a true wordsmith and this wonderful piece of poetry just proves that point. May your pen ever run gold my friend. Another fave. have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.

Andrea Dietrich August 6, 2018 at 3:01 PM Did this one win a contest. Someone wrote congratulations, so I echo that if you won a contest with it. It would be very well deserved. Vijay Pandit August 6, 2018 at 3:09 PM No Andrea--it didn't. But I still like what I wrote. Many thanks for asking.

Pandita Sietesantos July 15, 2018 at 3:22 PM My friend, I bow to your most superior talent! I didn't even attempt this chalenge, but you did and penned a most romantic piece that is so lovely with flawlessly flowing rhymes! WOW! Hugs and love. Pandita Vijay Pandit July 30, 2018 at 6:49 AM Thank you my friend..appreciate and value your feedback.

Frances Schiavina July 13, 2018 at 9:52 AM Your poetry is so deliciously descriptive if I was an artist I would paint your poems and let my eyes feast on beauty. Congratulations! Vijay Pandit July 30, 2018 at 6:48 AM So kind of you..many thanks Frances.

Paul Callus July 5, 2018 at 10:05 AM Spenserian stanzas are not easy to write, Vijay, but you delivered with apparent ease, dealing with a romantic topic that tugs at our imagination. Regards // paul Vijay Pandit July 5, 2018 at 1:53 PM Thank you Paul...really appreciate your kind feedback.

Charlie Smith July 4, 2018 at 11:04 AM Your skill shines in this one Vijay, best wishes... Vijay Pandit July 5, 2018 at 9:49 AM Thank you Charlie.

Harry Horsman July 2, 2018 at 4:51 AM Amazing, Vijay. Yes a classic. Vijay Pandit July 2, 2018 at 5:43 AM Thank you Harry.

Arturo Michael July 2, 2018 at 4:51 AM A true lover boy poem... You may not see me often these day but I wish you well always... All the best Vijay... Arturo Michael July 3, 2018 at 8:35 AM I am taking care of a family member and it consumes all my time... But I don't mind... Keep good... Soon I'll be back on the scene... Vijay Pandit July 2, 2018 at 5:44 AM Thank you Arturo. Yes..I haven't seen your work in a while. Hope all is well.

Janice Canerdy July 1, 2018 at 4:38 PM Very skillfully written and moving, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit July 2, 2018 at 5:43 AM Thank you Janice.

Nette Onclaud July 1, 2018 at 9:06 AM ohh, a stirring write which holds me in awe, vijay...your muse is on a roll in the arena of nature and romance!..huggs Vijay Pandit July 1, 2018 at 2:23 PM Thank you nette..appreciate the feedback.

Mystic Rose Rose July 1, 2018 at 8:45 AM I've come for another read . Its softly enchanting. It creates an aura of love and romantic highs. Thanks for sharing, have yourself a beautiful day. Paint with all the colors of your words, and play... Vijay Pandit July 1, 2018 at 2:23 PM Great advice ...I will try..many thanks Pixie.

Joseph May June 30, 2018 at 11:28 AM "After the storm, skies disperse romantic hues...Nicely penned Vijay Vijay Pandit June 30, 2018 at 3:43 PM Thank you Joseph.

Supraja Kannan June 30, 2018 at 3:56 AM So beautiful. Good luck in the contest. Vijay Pandit June 30, 2018 at 7:37 AM Thank you Supraja.

Andrea Dietrich June 29, 2018 at 8:43 PM a nice one with that romantic tone to it, Vijay. Love the imagery of your title phrase! Vijay Pandit June 30, 2018 at 7:37 AM Thank you Andrea..appreciate the kind words.

Besma Riabi Dziri June 29, 2018 at 11:16 AM When "summer rain storm" clears away "budding talk"! and lets your "amour fade fast" .. many a beauty rise, portrayed by a talented pen! An amazing write with a gripping imagery! A great joy to read! A sweet journey for the heart and soul. Thank you so much dear Vijay for sharing such a beauty! A FAV and a win for me! The best of luck in the contest. Stay safe and blessed. Vijay Pandit June 30, 2018 at 7:36 AM I am delighted to read your glowing comments, Besma. You are so kind..many many thanks.

Heidi Sands June 29, 2018 at 10:33 AM Well done Vijay! Good luck in the contest :) Vijay Pandit June 30, 2018 at 7:35 AM Thank you Heidi..Always happy to read your comments.

Winged Warrior June 29, 2018 at 8:54 AM Magnificently rendered Vijay...best for a (((BIG))) win my friend...love & light...^WW^ Vijay Pandit June 30, 2018 at 7:34 AM Thank you WW..appreciate your visit and kind words, as always.

Mike Gentile June 29, 2018 at 7:50 AM True to form, you have created yet another very romantic and enchanting poem, Vijay Best for a win, !!! Vijay Pandit June 30, 2018 at 7:34 AM Appreciate the feedback Mike..many thanks, as always.

Demetrios Trifiatis June 29, 2018 at 6:45 AM Mesmerizing stanzas, vividly painted with the brush of inspiration dear friend, Vijay! Vijay Pandit June 30, 2018 at 7:33 AM You are so kind my friend, Demetrios..appreciate the feedback..many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose June 29, 2018 at 5:52 AM I feel the mist of a beautiful poem indeed. Gl in the contest Vijay Vijay Pandit June 30, 2018 at 7:32 AM Thank you Pixie..appreciate the kind words.

Lyric Man June 28, 2018 at 11:04 PM Vijay, how you can write a story that makes sense with all of those rules I read at the bottom is beyond me. But you did and it was exceptional! Deep Respect!!! Vijay Pandit June 30, 2018 at 7:32 AM I find the rules constraining, but like a challenge every now and then..many thanks LM..appreciate the kind feedback.