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Yesterdays

She swept the side effects of yesterday Into an unknown place where Longing transcends the ache Of remembered years that cling To wounds that never heal. The haunting specter of childhood ghosts Lost in some nostalgic fantasy Sift sad shadows from the past; Unwilling to release the pain That surrounds her days and nights With the relentless intensity Of memories that will not fade. Perhaps time is ready to embrace The ceaseless repetition of all The yesterdays, todays and tomorrows Bringing reality to a new transition; So the shutters of her mind closed And in her darkness she found release.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/20/2012 6:55:00 PM
Even with free verse you sustain a cadence that is as smooth as silk... such strong emotions expressed in your own inimitable style. Excellent word use! Love, Keith
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Date: 10/6/2012 11:02:00 AM
A great write, my dear friend... kudos! Love and hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 9/22/2012 7:07:00 PM
A beautiful depiction of the remnants of the gloomy past. In my experience the horror stays like a cancer. And thanks elizabeth for your kind comments on my poem Let there be Light. It pleases me to see that you have full insight into the cause my poem is pursuing. The poem aims at awakening the conscience of the evil doers. I wish you and other right thinking writers and poets to write against corruption and amassing of dirty money. Most appropriately run a contest on this topic. Rg -Mohammad
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Date: 8/30/2012 5:05:00 PM
I see by the comments you were sick. I hope you are well now. This poem is very deep. Sometimes depression and sickness brings out the best poetry. I know it does in me.
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Date: 8/24/2012 10:22:00 AM
Hidden passion comes out in to wonderful words. Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/23/2012 11:59:00 PM
I'm speachless? :oO The deepness,and beauty of it...I'll be adding another one to the collection. ;o)
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Date: 8/21/2012 10:37:00 AM
Very nice........... George
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Date: 8/21/2012 9:41:00 AM
Brilliant Write Eliz..enjoy this much..nice share :) wish you all the best :) SK
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Date: 8/21/2012 9:31:00 AM
Have I seen this one before? I've such a terrible memory. Anywho - Do I find death in the last line? Probably death is the only release from all the yesterdays, eh? Duh. I'm so slow these days. If I'm off track, LIz, filll me in. Love, daver
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Date: 8/20/2012 4:33:00 PM
For us there are the memories that come with all the years.
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Date: 8/20/2012 2:15:00 PM
I was just going through Yasmin Khan's comment where she inquired about your health, I wish you speedy recovery, my dear friend Elize. Your work is indeed an inspiration for part timers like myself, I hope to see much more of it
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Date: 8/19/2012 10:29:00 AM
hey, Lizzy, how have you been? Put up some new poetry, my friend!
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Elizabeth Wesley
Date: 8/19/2012 1:38:00 PM
I'm hacking my way into oblivion with this terrible cough. Willing to share as I have more than enough if you can handle it,,, any takers?
Date: 8/19/2012 8:56:00 AM
A wonderful heartfelt poem by you Elizabeth!Thanks for visiting and reading my poem.
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Date: 8/19/2012 8:39:00 AM
Troubling but beautiful verse about ghosts from the past, Elizabeth...I like the optimism and hope expressed in the last verse....Have a blessed Sunday - Tim
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Date: 8/16/2012 6:06:00 PM
What an incredible and moving poem this is. Thank you for this. I'm sorry I havn't been on the soup lately, but thanks a million for your support on my poetry. Keep writing! Always, Laura
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Date: 8/15/2012 2:28:00 AM
Great job on expressing yourself as in your emotion. Tony
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Date: 8/15/2012 12:46:00 AM
Very deep very beautiful, very heart felt a magnicent piece. You are a very special poet Elizabeth my dear friend, and I hope that you like myself are dancing on mountain tops even though at times the rocks of life can be sharp and require a very skilled dancer!
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Elizabeth Wesley
Date: 8/19/2012 1:36:00 PM
My mountain has a top and a bottom. I travel between the two points frequently.
Date: 8/14/2012 10:01:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it...Sometimes childhood is not a happy contented time for a child and it leaves deep scars..Sara
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Date: 8/14/2012 8:57:00 AM
Sad but awesome write. Bless you always!
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Date: 8/14/2012 6:19:00 AM
hope she prayed in the darkness,and the release she found was God,great sad write Elizabeth
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Date: 8/14/2012 2:29:00 AM
A very thought-provoking read. I have a lot of childhood ghosts that haunt me also.
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Date: 8/13/2012 2:48:00 PM
My Gosh, you do get your share of visits. :) I guess they're like me, they miss you when your gone. Sure enjoyed your visit to my poems. And deep within the shadows the past begins to show. A ray of light like a black hole that shows you where to go. The emptiness of reminicing that brings with it the dawn. Sends the heart a new beginning to help it carry on. Take Care Elizabeth, and so will I.
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Date: 8/13/2012 1:55:00 PM
Powerful write indeed, my friend - your free verse is as good as your rhyming verse; which style do you prefer? I like FV now, but still prefer to write in rhyme
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Date: 8/13/2012 9:14:00 AM
A very heartfelt write every girl can relate, Elizabeth. Always glad to read urs this night :). thanks for stopping by. Dinda
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Date: 8/13/2012 8:29:00 AM
having a bad season. i've been fired rehired, robbed, scamed, having break ups, in a dry spell, and quit my job today. trying to climb out before considering suicide. it's bad. but the other day johnny wrote "still". it's comming up on the season when i lost april, next month.
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