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Yesterday Became An Empty Shell

Yesterday, before I found your love, life seemed dim and days grew dull. All I ever did was mope and cry; without true love, I thought that I would die. My future faced each stumble fearlessly, artfully; I was an empty hull. Troubles ripped my soul most every day; lost in your pain, I could never fly. Seemed that problems never found a lull; steadily streaming to my throbbing skull. So, sometimes I’d stop and scream for you, oh, perfect love, the angels sigh. Far beyond all hope is Heaven’s flight from hopelessness to eternity. Away I’d fly, free from the lonely plights; too many nights without love’s band. Now, it seems so very long ago; that time when hope would never grow. It was impossible to understand how your precious love could help me stand. Looks like love came knocking evermore upon loves’ door with her face aglow. As if the dawning light would never come, should life return with one command? Though my days with you by death grew dim, forever love, more than a whim. They're here within my heart and mind to stay, sweet memories of yesterday! Here I dream; kissing your face again, thinking life is grim, oh sweet cherubim. To forever your sweet smiles have flown; I am left all alone; all I do is moan. Stay close, my love, I need you, now. Comfort my dreams; I will not groan. Oh, I know your love could lift this empty shell from the depths of hell. I need you now; please come somehow; I beg you, now…I beg you, now! Believe, and miracles will come your way; that’s what they say the Scriptures tell. In the future life beyond the Vail before our Lord each head shall bow. Yesterday we two walked together cheerfully; but yesterday became an empty shell. Ó January 26, 2014 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: Yesterday's Acrostic Sponsored by: Roy Jerden

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Date: 2/10/2014 5:44:00 AM
I like your work...
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 2/11/2014 9:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Samuel.
Date: 2/8/2014 7:39:00 PM
Wow these poems are sad!! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 2/11/2014 9:09:00 PM
Thanks for the congratulations, Debbie, Sad, it would be without the love of my life. Thank God we still have one another. Love to cherish! Big Smiles, Dane
Date: 2/8/2014 12:11:00 PM
I lost my love suddenly many years ago. Today would have been his birthday. This hit home. Congratulations. . Love, Joyce
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 2/8/2014 3:05:00 PM
So sad when someone looses the love of their life unexpectedly. It happened to my grandma, also. Let's send him a happy birthday smile and cling to eternal love. Thank you for your congratulations. It's nice to see you here reading, feeling, commenting, living! God bless your sweet heart. Big Smiles, Dane Ann
Date: 2/8/2014 7:58:00 AM
Way to go ...Congrats on your great winning work..Sara
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 2/8/2014 3:06:00 PM
Thank you, Sara, for the congratulations and for stopping by to read. Big Smiles, Dane Ann
Date: 2/7/2014 8:05:00 AM
Outstanding piece, congratulations.
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 2/7/2014 8:26:00 AM
Thank you, very much, Richard. I appreciate your comment. Big Smiles, Dane Ann
Date: 2/6/2014 5:58:00 PM
Congratulations Dane, a worthy winner indeed. Take care, Richard
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 2/7/2014 5:46:00 AM
Thank you, kindly, Richard. It was a challenge that I enjoyed writing for...being a Beatles Teen! Big Smiles, Dane Ann
Date: 2/6/2014 4:48:00 PM
very good Dana congrats on win hugs
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 2/7/2014 5:48:00 AM
Thank you, Shadow, for the congrats and the hugs. One can never get enough sweet hugs! Big Smiles. Dane Ann
Date: 2/6/2014 4:07:00 PM
The use of internal rhyme is unusual and so well done. congrats. BG
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 2/7/2014 5:40:00 AM
Thanks, Barbara. It's nice to see you here. Thanks for stopping by to leave your congrats. I really appreciate it. Big Smiles, Dane Ann
Date: 2/6/2014 1:44:00 PM
Very nice....congratulations
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 2/7/2014 5:49:00 AM
Thank you, Donna for your compliment and congrats. I appreciate you for taking the time to read and comment. Big Smiles, Dane Ann
Date: 2/6/2014 1:24:00 PM
Excellent , congratulations xx
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 2/7/2014 5:50:00 AM
Thanks, Mandy for your high praise, which is much appreciated. Big Smiles, Dane Ann
Date: 2/6/2014 12:11:00 PM
I like the way you used the internal rhyme scheme. A lot of angst, which fits the theme well. Congratulations!
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 2/7/2014 5:53:00 AM
Thank you, Roy. I am so glad you appreciated and chose my poem as a winner. Your contest was a wonderful challenge and gave me a bit of a stretch, which I always enjoy. Thanks for the win. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

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