Yes, This Day Is Done

Yes, This Day Is Done

In the corner of the deck unseen,
An old lady with a floppy straw hat,
Tired, arthritic, reads in afternoon's cool,
And listens for the dogs.

For first there is a hum on the roads,
Then one by one, a bark appears,
As the business folks throw off their burdens,
And let their Rovers and Butch’s out to play.

Then there is an assembly of voices,
A choir of happy canines,
Meeting each over unseen over fences,
But friends of the evening just the same.

Then the old woman dozes from her book
As the sun falls orange and purple,
Remembering cubicles, telephones,
A thousand computers clacking.

Coffee breaks and sneaking out for Snickers,
The smell of the smokers close in some alcove,
Papers bound, dispatched couriers carrying cases
Intense, concentrating.

Each of millions of secrets - each’s dreams or thoughts,
A remembered movie, a kiss, baseball in the park,
Hot dogs, wheel chairs, a red car,
Babies, coats, bills, shoes wafted on barbecue smoke.

And the old lady in the corner of the deck
Blending into the walls as pots of flowers
In her mumu, dozing, remembering, being “in on the bustle”
Contentedly pulling the brim over her face and dreams

Free to dream of ocean splashes and freckled face boys,
Of roaming through pansies and periwinkles,
Humming her “their” favorite song, 
Free, retired
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Neumann Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 11:15 AM
That is great. A wonderful description of freedom. Kind wishes, Kai
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 1:11 AM
' roaming through pansies and periwinkles ' wow your muse is so poetic awesome and all the scenes in your mod ballad style story poem you depict fabulously. The dogs meeting up sounds cool. Kudos for a great poem. So nice to read from your inking again, Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 2:12 PM
Your words make me so happy and appreciative that I am retired. Age may make one slow down but I haven't forgotten how it felt to be overwhelmed with work with never enough time to do some of the fun things I enjoy, like poetry. This is a special piece that we all can relate to. I love the imagery that makes this poem so real. Beautifully written Sunlite! : ) xxoo
Trifiatis Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 3:28 AM
I am at the stage dearest, Sunlite, although my poetic heart keeps me dreaming! Excellent! Hugs
Sathasivam Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 11:22 PM
Excellent and well penned. Thank you for sharing it.
Wanter Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 10:56 AM
Very kind of you!
Laurie Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 5:43 PM
Hello Sunlite … looking back, our past always seems more romantic and positive, however the memories keep us believing that life is worth living and enjoying - thank you Sunlite - Lindsay
Wanter Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 10:55 AM
Thank you for writing this wonderful comment.
Green Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 8:41 AM
I absolutely loved this my friend. The picture of retirement you create is warm and wonderful. I adored the dogs being let out so they could converse with their friends over the fences. Really well done Sunlite. Bravo!
Wanter Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 10:29 AM
It makes me happy that you like this. I worried about it being too long. Thank you!
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