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"Yes expresses my love to God Who first loved me and is always loving me.” By the Poet
YES affirms my devotion to the Almighty since He fully knows my being’s verity in response to His query, needing honesty: “Do you love me with sincerity?” YES asserts my obedience of certainty toward service midst my infirmity for the Lord’s call along His sovereignty: “Follow me as Your Shepherd along paths of serenity.” YES allows my heart to express the veracity of my trust and belief to the omnipotent Deity Who assures me life everlasting of salvation-security: “I am the Way against existence-futility.” YES acknowledges my human nature’s inability yet enables me to depend on the Creator’s powerful tenacity while strengthened by His Word, marked by immutability: “Without Me, you can do nothing, for I specialize in impossibility.” YES aligns me toward functional spirituality in my worship to thank and praise the Saviour for His bounty declaring to Him my faithfulness and loyalty: “Thine is the greatness and victory* throughout eternity!
*1Chronicles 29:11 - Thine, O LORD, is the greatness, and the power, and the glory, and the victory, and the majesty: for all that is in the heaven and in the earth is thine; thine is the kingdom, O LORD, and thou art exalted as head above all. Dramatic Monologue in Monorhyme May 6, 2023 1st place, "Writing Challenge - 'Y 'Words" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Constance La France; judged on 5/10/2023

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Date: 5/11/2023 10:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win in the Contest ...dear Beata. Yes...can mean a lot in our lives. Well said.
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Date: 5/11/2023 1:17:00 PM
Ah, I love this monorhyme with your faithfulness and loyalty Beata! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 5/11/2023 1:02:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Beata :) - hugs
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Date: 5/11/2023 8:51:00 AM
what a wonderful monorhyme Beata:-)Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/11/2023 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Yes" is a wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 5/11/2023 6:49:00 AM
Beata, thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and I love your quote !
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Date: 5/10/2023 11:18:00 PM
The energetic implications of Yes are beautifully brought out. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/10/2023 9:51:00 PM
Hi Beata, love your affirmative response to the Almighty's call and everything He wants from you . Lovely entry. Congratulations on your first place win. This goes into my FAVE.
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Date: 5/10/2023 9:23:00 PM
Hi Beata, You composed a well-written write on your chosen word. Like always your faith shined bright in this verse. Congratulations on your 1st-place win in the contest. Have a great evening;-) Alexis
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Date: 5/6/2023 7:24:00 AM
- Yes, you expresses your love for God beautifully, Beata :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 5/6/2023 7:03:00 AM
Such a great inspiring piece Beatta, love how you use of yes in such an original way. Nice rhyme and flow with really nice imagery too. Have a great weekend, Gordon
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