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Golden blooms lined each side of the highway, For the exotic places had long been calling. At last the day came to put those cares away! You must seize the moment as time is crawling. For the exotic places had long been calling; And there was sunshine and gaiety in my heart! You must seize the moment as time is crawling, Like daffodils at springtime blooming's start. And there was sunshine and gaiety in my heart, And canaries perched vividly in green trees, Like daffodils at springtime blooming's start, And bees and fragrance drifted on warm breeze. And canaries perched vividly in green trees. At last the day came to put those cares away; And bees and fragrance drifted on warm breeze. Golden blooms lined each side of the highway! Written on 2/17/2021 For: 'Proud Pantoum Poetry Contest ' Poetry Contest Contest Judged on 2/27/2021

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Date: 2/21/2021 10:27:00 AM
Hi Evelyn, This is a great Pantoum for the contest theme. As always your content and imagery and is lovely. I found it to positive and encouraging as well.Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/21/2021 2:41:00 PM
Hi Alexis, Thank you for the vote of confidence and for your kind words which bring delight. Have a wonderful day yourself :) Evelyn
Date: 2/20/2021 2:25:00 PM
Hi Evelyn! Since yellow is one of my favorite colors, I just had to see what this was about. What a gorgeous, sunny surprise! Thank you, and good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/20/2021 3:03:00 PM
Hi Jennifer! I am gratified that you were pleasantly surprised. Thank you for taking the time to express your appreciation of this poem, and also for your kind well wishes.
Date: 2/18/2021 1:07:00 PM
Sounds like a lovely dream of a spring day. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/18/2021 2:20:00 PM
Your thoughtful comment is much appreciated. God bless.
Date: 2/18/2021 10:54:00 AM
What a sunshiny day! God bless!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/18/2021 2:17:00 PM
The best kind! Thank you, Kim. God bless!
Date: 2/17/2021 10:46:00 PM
A lovely pantoum with all those yellow flowers. Daffodils are extremely beautiful. ~~
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/17/2021 10:57:00 PM
They will be blooming before too long. Thank you for the happy thoughts. :)
Date: 2/17/2021 5:21:00 PM
This is such a lovely, well-constructed pantoum, Evelyn. I wish you much success in the contest. Nice job!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/17/2021 5:37:00 PM
Your appreciation is so gratifying. You have my heartfelt thanks. :)

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