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Yellow Bouquet

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I lived a short poem yesterday With the sun rising as a bouquet Beautiful pale yellow roses on display 'Pon the blue sky thrown in an array From the garden the birds entertained New heights their voices sought to attain The ripe fruit upon the vine dazzled in dew Soon filled baskets and not a just a few Prepared veggies for a summer noon meal So much to do it seemed unreal Living a poem is not so easy to achieve Life's daily accomplishments sometimes grieve

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Catherine Labeau

Date: 7/7/2015 1:50:00 PM

doing a great job doing both congrats as i want to join your table and see the world with your eyes

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/2/2015 11:32:00 PM

We can try to reach to poetic heights as you state so clearly in this work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/1/2015 4:21:00 PM

You painted this extremely beautiful and excellent, I like all the lines and how you constructed it..............A.M.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/1/2015 2:37:00 PM

Sara, the bouquet of your life is deeply beautiful. I hope you are well...

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/1/2015 9:10:00 AM

Sara, lovely title and wow wonderful poem!! i love the imagery!!! the last two lines! great!~Olive Eloisa =)~

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/30/2015 8:54:00 PM

Such a beautiful, inspirational write this is, Sara, as lovely as fresh yellow roses! I enjoyed the read and give it a 7! Warmest regards. Pandita

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/30/2015 9:35:00 AM

To live a poem everyday...a thought to ponder. I liked it. Maybe not everyday is as colorful as yours the day before you wrote this but certainly worthy enough for a line or two. Btw, thank you for that high placement. Curious though, I got it alongside others whose works were really great! Humbled, and grateful.

Constance La France

Date: 6/30/2015 8:39:00 AM

Sara, lovely words, 7 and I want to thank you so much for my placement in your 5 Line Contest, I am very honored

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2015 10:19:00 PM

Colorful and enchanting, Sara. Lovely!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/29/2015 4:05:00 PM

- Love the opening line ..... this is beautiful Sara! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/28/2015 2:11:00 PM

Lovely thoughts, Sara...life is a poem, with tasks come moments of beauty and grief. Hugs, Rhonda

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/28/2015 10:25:00 AM

nuggets of everyday life shine through your heartwarming work, sara... you are a nature's muse!.... much enjoyed!.. huggs

Tim Ryerson

Date: 6/28/2015 1:41:00 AM

"I lived a short poem yesterday"...Now THAT my friend, is a great line. I love it when you write simple yet wisdom-filled observations about the joys and sorrows of everyday life...Have a blessed Sunday - Tim

Diane Christian

Date: 6/27/2015 11:00:00 AM

beautiful boquet/ very descriptive