Yellow

I gaze at a saffron sunset as a tawny owl sails overhead, while yellow sunflowers feel threat until evening prayers are said. The flaxen fields and amber plains reflect the xanthous of fading sun. A copse of vivid ocher trees wanes awaiting a primrose moon to stun. Canary daisies soundly sleep and dream beside a citrine lake while glorious goldenrods peep gaily as fallow bucks’ antlers shake. Mary’s marigolds shine their best, a nankeen horizon fails to arrest. Soon the sun will propose its rest and slip below the mountain’s crest.
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Volumes Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 12:44 PM
You haven't written for a week. I figure I had better go back and fine some LAF poems that I haven't read. Love your sunny poem A lovely way to start my day. Thank you dear friend
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 12:53 PM
Oh, I've written plenty, but still without internet. I'll catch up with posting and with communication as time allows and I can get connected. I'm glad you enjoyed this one Svvie. I rather like it myself.
Grieves Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 6:29 AM
This encapsulates everything a sunset should be. I love it.
Fowler Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 7:06 AM
Hello Christopher. I am pleased you enjoyed this write! Thank you. :)
Congratulations on your win in the Contest...my friend. Sometimes I get lost when I focus on the source of your excellent ideas. One day , I stayed 6 hours reading poems of your page. ... So excited with more inspirational, encouraging, romantic poems....etc. No reader can be bored on your page.
Fowler Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 6:23 AM
You are so gentle and kind my friend. I am humbled by the hours you spent reading my poems. Thank you for the encouragement and support. Your words lie gentle with me. :)
Poet Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 1:15 PM
Your poetry "Yellow" is fantastic. From the first verse to the last, I was engrossed. I am happy for you that you won.
Fowler Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 6:20 PM
Thanks for your thoughtful comments Las. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 8:54 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely yellow write again. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Fowler Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 1:08 PM
Many thanks my friend Paula! hugs :)
La France Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 7:08 AM
Linda, thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Fowler Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 1:07 PM
Thank you Constance! Fun, fun, fun!!! :)
Wolf Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 3:42 PM
Majestic and magnificent poetic treatise (and treat!) on yellow, Linda. Amazing to me how you came up with all of this. Bravo! ~ Gershon
Fowler Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 6:56 PM
Thank you Gershon. I am pleased to read your comments. Sometimes I surprise myself. :) Linda
Goldsmith Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 10:00 AM
A colorful write. I really enjoyed it. I also did yellow. Good Luck.... Have a blessed day/weekend..........
Fowler Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 6:52 PM
Thank you Paula. A colorful response. :) Blessings back to you. :)
Daniel Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 8:36 AM
Awesome choice of words, Linda, thoroughly enjoyed:)
Fowler Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 8:57 AM
Thank you Jo. There are so many shades and hues of yellow. This was a fun write for me. :)
Pandit Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 5:34 AM
A beautiful at saffron sunset--much enjoyed the tone and flow of your poem, Linda.
Fowler Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 5:45 AM
Many thanks my supportive friend. I am pleased you enjoyed this poem.:)
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