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Yellow

I gaze at a saffron sunset as a tawny owl sails overhead, while yellow sunflowers feel threat until evening prayers are said. The flaxen fields and amber plains reflect the xanthous of fading sun. A copse of vivid ocher trees wanes awaiting a primrose moon to stun. Canary daisies soundly sleep and dream beside a citrine lake while glorious goldenrods peep gaily as fallow bucks’ antlers shake. Mary’s marigolds shine their best, a nankeen horizon fails to arrest. Soon the sun will propose its rest and slip below the mountain’s crest.

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Date: 7/21/2023 12:44:00 PM
You haven't written for a week. I figure I had better go back and fine some LAF poems that I haven't read. Love your sunny poem A lovely way to start my day. Thank you dear friend
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/23/2023 12:53:00 PM
Oh, I've written plenty, but still without internet. I'll catch up with posting and with communication as time allows and I can get connected. I'm glad you enjoyed this one Svvie. I rather like it myself.
Date: 6/22/2023 6:29:00 AM
This encapsulates everything a sunset should be. I love it.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/23/2023 7:06:00 AM
Hello Christopher. I am pleased you enjoyed this write! Thank you. :)
Date: 5/11/2023 10:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the Contest...my friend. Sometimes I get lost when I focus on the source of your excellent ideas. One day , I stayed 6 hours reading poems of your page. ... So excited with more inspirational, encouraging, romantic poems....etc. No reader can be bored on your page.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/12/2023 6:23:00 AM
You are so gentle and kind my friend. I am humbled by the hours you spent reading my poems. Thank you for the encouragement and support. Your words lie gentle with me. :)
Date: 5/11/2023 1:15:00 PM
Your poetry "Yellow" is fantastic. From the first verse to the last, I was engrossed. I am happy for you that you won.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/11/2023 6:20:00 PM
Thanks for your thoughtful comments Las. :)
Date: 5/11/2023 8:54:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely yellow write again. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/11/2023 1:08:00 PM
Many thanks my friend Paula! hugs :)
Date: 5/11/2023 7:08:00 AM
Linda, thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/11/2023 1:07:00 PM
Thank you Constance! Fun, fun, fun!!! :)
Date: 5/5/2023 3:42:00 PM
Majestic and magnificent poetic treatise (and treat!) on yellow, Linda. Amazing to me how you came up with all of this. Bravo! ~ Gershon
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/5/2023 6:56:00 PM
Thank you Gershon. I am pleased to read your comments. Sometimes I surprise myself. :) Linda
Date: 5/5/2023 10:00:00 AM
A colorful write. I really enjoyed it. I also did yellow. Good Luck.... Have a blessed day/weekend..........
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/5/2023 6:52:00 PM
Thank you Paula. A colorful response. :) Blessings back to you. :)
Date: 5/5/2023 8:36:00 AM
Awesome choice of words, Linda, thoroughly enjoyed:)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/5/2023 8:57:00 AM
Thank you Jo. There are so many shades and hues of yellow. This was a fun write for me. :)
Date: 5/5/2023 5:34:00 AM
A beautiful at saffron sunset--much enjoyed the tone and flow of your poem, Linda.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/5/2023 5:45:00 AM
Many thanks my supportive friend. I am pleased you enjoyed this poem.:)

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