Yearn

Oh, how I yearn, blossoms of spring
When nights are mired in wintry freeze
And days shudder, as zephyrs zing,
Where fall decayed in frozen breeze.

As meadows ache of dormant dreams
Oh, how I yearn, blossoms of spring
And prairies rushing giggling streams
When songs of romance robins sing.

While shivering trees snowflakes cling
And barren hills long verdant glee,
Oh, how I yearn, blossoms of spring
Where chasing nectar monarchs spree.

When buds winsome of season please
Sprouting trees that rustle and swing,
As tranquil green foothills appease;
Oh, how I yearn, blossoms of spring.

May 5, 2023
Placed 2nd: Writing Challenge – “Y” Words Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Form: Quatern (eight syllables per line)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
May 25, 2023 at 12:14 PM
So charming. I love a good quatern!
Baker Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 4:29 PM
It's taking its sweet time to get here this year. Your beautiful imagery has got me yearning for Spring. Good work, my dear friend. Good luck in the contest! I hope your weekend goes well. Bill
Fowler Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 1:43 PM
Hello my friend Vijay. I find this poem full of imagery and I love the Quatern form as well. It lends itself beautifully to your spring blossoms yearning. "...meadows ache of dormant dreams..." - just lovely! Congratulations on your win! :)
Pandit Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 12:46 PM
Thank you Linda.
Poet Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 1:13 PM
Back to your poem "Yearn" is fantastic. From the first verse to the last, I am happy for you that you win this contest.
Pandit Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 12:46 PM
Thank you my friend.
Andresen Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 1:10 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Vijay :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 12:46 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 8:49 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Love the ending. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Pandit Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 12:46 PM
Thank you Paula.
La France Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 7:03 AM
Vijay, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Pandit Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 12:45 PM
Much appreciate, Constance--many thanks.
Y. Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 10:13 PM
Hi Vijay, You took the word yearn and penned such a well-written poem. It had good content and vibrant imagery. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a good evening;-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 12:45 PM
Thank you Alexis.
George Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 10:05 PM
Hi Vijay, back to your sweet poem of yearning with Congratulations on your win.
Pandit Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 12:45 PM
Thank you Valsa.
Seeker Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 9:11 PM
A superb Quatern ~ warmest congratulations on your win, Vijay! Enjoyed.
Pandit Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 12:45 PM
Thank you US.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 12:53 AM
We all yearn for spring. Sorry I have been rather sick lately.
Pandit Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 12:44 PM
Thank you Victor.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 12:03 PM
Wow, Vijay, another gorgeous poem <3
Pandit Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 12:44 PM
Thank you BJ.
Daniel Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 2:24 AM
I like this one, Vijay, nicely done:)
Pandit Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 6:04 AM
Thank you Jo--much appreciate.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 4:54 PM
Love the imagery of: While shivering trees snowflakes cling
Pandit Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 6:04 AM
Thank you Kim--much appreciate.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 7:52 AM
This is the most melodious song of spring that I have ever heard, my dear friend, Vijay. I know it is too late but for me is a Fave. God bless you!
Pandit Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 2:06 PM
So nice to hear that from you Demetrios. So special my friend, to receive your FAVE. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
Canerdy Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 2:19 PM
Vijay, this is a very lovely, appealing poem. Your repeat line is especially good. Janice
Pandit Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 2:05 PM
Much appreciate your kind feedback, Janice. Many thanks.
Sands Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 8:26 AM
I love this perfect spring poem and finally we have some nice weather this werkend with some scenery like this. I can feel this poem in all ways. Very nice Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 2:05 PM
Glad to hear that spring is finally here for you. Much appreciate, Heidi--many thanks.
Gentile Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 7:27 AM
Vijay, such beautiful images are created by your seasonal Quatern! "When buds winsome of season please" is my favorite line as for me, it characterizes the entire write!! So well done!! Happy Sunday!
Pandit Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 2:03 PM
Many thanks Mike--much appreciate.
George Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 7:35 PM
Your yearning for spring blossoms, rushing streams running through prairies, trees with leaves and branches that rustle and swing, monarch butterflies that chase nectar, all so beautifully expressed. All the best in the contest dear Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 2:03 PM
Thank you, Valsa. Much appreciate your kind feedback.
May Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 11:22 AM
Sometimes old man Winter doesn't want to leave, Well penned Vijay, Best wishes
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 1:17 PM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.
Kendrick Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 4:17 AM
Oh!!, Vijay, this one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 1:16 PM
Much appreciate, Sara. Many thanks.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 10:53 PM
Brilliant for the contest.
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 1:16 PM
Thank you Victor--much appreciate.
Chuuk Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 9:00 PM
This should be a song. If I had my ukulele, and can still play, I would have loved to play this. So beautifully written, my friend. I love it :)
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 1:16 PM
So nice to hear that my friend. Much appreciate your insights, Fin. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
Nicole Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 7:25 PM
As cooler temps tickle and tease, barren branches on tall and tender trees, warmer weather, the heart is always longing for. You paint such beautiful images with you words, Vijay. Spring is a lovely season, indeed. :) Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 1:14 PM
Glad you liked the poem my friend. Much appreciate your glowing feedback, Brandy. Many thanks. Hugs to you!
Buehler Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 6:32 PM
A poem of such luscious images that it makes me glad that beautiful spring is at last upon us. Best wishes. :)
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 1:13 PM
So nice to hear that from you, Evelyn. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.
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