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Oh, how I yearn, blossoms of spring When nights are mired in wintry freeze And days shudder, as zephyrs zing, Where fall decayed in frozen breeze. As meadows ache of dormant dreams Oh, how I yearn, blossoms of spring And prairies rushing giggling streams When songs of romance robins sing. While shivering trees snowflakes cling And barren hills long verdant glee, Oh, how I yearn, blossoms of spring Where chasing nectar monarchs spree. When buds winsome of season please Sprouting trees that rustle and swing, As tranquil green foothills appease; Oh, how I yearn, blossoms of spring. May 5, 2023 Placed 2nd: Writing Challenge – “Y” Words Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Form: Quatern (eight syllables per line)

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Date: 5/25/2023 12:14:00 PM
So charming. I love a good quatern!
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Date: 5/20/2023 4:29:00 PM
It's taking its sweet time to get here this year. Your beautiful imagery has got me yearning for Spring. Good work, my dear friend. Good luck in the contest! I hope your weekend goes well. Bill
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Date: 5/11/2023 1:43:00 PM
Hello my friend Vijay. I find this poem full of imagery and I love the Quatern form as well. It lends itself beautifully to your spring blossoms yearning. "...meadows ache of dormant dreams..." - just lovely! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2023 12:46:00 PM
Thank you Linda.
Date: 5/11/2023 1:13:00 PM
Back to your poem "Yearn" is fantastic. From the first verse to the last, I am happy for you that you win this contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2023 12:46:00 PM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 5/11/2023 1:10:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Vijay :) - hugs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2023 12:46:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 5/11/2023 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Love the ending. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2023 12:46:00 PM
Thank you Paula.
Date: 5/11/2023 7:03:00 AM
Vijay, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2023 12:45:00 PM
Much appreciate, Constance--many thanks.
Date: 5/10/2023 10:13:00 PM
Hi Vijay, You took the word yearn and penned such a well-written poem. It had good content and vibrant imagery. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a good evening;-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2023 12:45:00 PM
Thank you Alexis.
Date: 5/10/2023 10:05:00 PM
Hi Vijay, back to your sweet poem of yearning with Congratulations on your win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2023 12:45:00 PM
Thank you Valsa.
Date: 5/10/2023 9:11:00 PM
A superb Quatern ~ warmest congratulations on your win, Vijay! Enjoyed.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2023 12:45:00 PM
Thank you US.
Date: 5/10/2023 12:53:00 AM
We all yearn for spring. Sorry I have been rather sick lately.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2023 12:44:00 PM
Thank you Victor.
Date: 5/9/2023 12:03:00 PM
Wow, Vijay, another gorgeous poem <3
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/12/2023 12:44:00 PM
Thank you BJ.
Date: 5/9/2023 2:24:00 AM
I like this one, Vijay, nicely done:)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/9/2023 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Jo--much appreciate.
Date: 5/8/2023 4:54:00 PM
Love the imagery of: While shivering trees snowflakes cling
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/9/2023 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Kim--much appreciate.
Date: 5/8/2023 7:52:00 AM
This is the most melodious song of spring that I have ever heard, my dear friend, Vijay. I know it is too late but for me is a Fave. God bless you!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/8/2023 2:06:00 PM
So nice to hear that from you Demetrios. So special my friend, to receive your FAVE. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
Date: 5/7/2023 2:19:00 PM
Vijay, this is a very lovely, appealing poem. Your repeat line is especially good. Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/8/2023 2:05:00 PM
Much appreciate your kind feedback, Janice. Many thanks.
Date: 5/7/2023 8:26:00 AM
I love this perfect spring poem and finally we have some nice weather this werkend with some scenery like this. I can feel this poem in all ways. Very nice Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/8/2023 2:05:00 PM
Glad to hear that spring is finally here for you. Much appreciate, Heidi--many thanks.
Date: 5/7/2023 7:27:00 AM
Vijay, such beautiful images are created by your seasonal Quatern! "When buds winsome of season please" is my favorite line as for me, it characterizes the entire write!! So well done!! Happy Sunday!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/8/2023 2:03:00 PM
Many thanks Mike--much appreciate.
Date: 5/6/2023 7:35:00 PM
Your yearning for spring blossoms, rushing streams running through prairies, trees with leaves and branches that rustle and swing, monarch butterflies that chase nectar, all so beautifully expressed. All the best in the contest dear Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/8/2023 2:03:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa. Much appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 5/6/2023 11:22:00 AM
Sometimes old man Winter doesn't want to leave, Well penned Vijay, Best wishes
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/6/2023 1:17:00 PM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.
Date: 5/6/2023 4:17:00 AM
Oh!!, Vijay, this one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/6/2023 1:16:00 PM
Much appreciate, Sara. Many thanks.
Date: 5/5/2023 10:53:00 PM
Brilliant for the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/6/2023 1:16:00 PM
Thank you Victor--much appreciate.
Date: 5/5/2023 9:00:00 PM
This should be a song. If I had my ukulele, and can still play, I would have loved to play this. So beautifully written, my friend. I love it :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/6/2023 1:16:00 PM
So nice to hear that my friend. Much appreciate your insights, Fin. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
Date: 5/5/2023 7:25:00 PM
As cooler temps tickle and tease, barren branches on tall and tender trees, warmer weather, the heart is always longing for. You paint such beautiful images with you words, Vijay. Spring is a lovely season, indeed. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/6/2023 1:14:00 PM
Glad you liked the poem my friend. Much appreciate your glowing feedback, Brandy. Many thanks. Hugs to you!
Date: 5/5/2023 6:32:00 PM
A poem of such luscious images that it makes me glad that beautiful spring is at last upon us. Best wishes. :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/6/2023 1:13:00 PM
So nice to hear that from you, Evelyn. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.
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