Year of the Acorn

Year of the Acorn
(For my Father who
has Parkinsons &
Alzheimer's)
22/12/12  21:21
pm

Out on a winter walk
one day
you solemnly put an
acorn into my hand.
Something in my head
whispered
"Keep it safe
and he'll be safe".
I kept it to this
day.

Year one.
One candle on my
cake,
burned into my
mind's eye forever.
You took a
photograph
to keep me in the
picture.

Year four.
My sister arrived in
the world. 
You took me to feed
the swans.
Back home
she greeted us with
screams.
I fled, covering my
ears.

Year thirteen.
Mother told me the
facts of life.
You kept well out of
it.

Year nineteen,
A disco at the end
of a long, quiet
road.
You always drove me
safely there and
back.
You were judge and
jury
of all boyfriends.

Year twenty three.
You gave me away
to the best
boyfriend of all.

A montage of eras
replay in the bright
lens of memory
till the year of the
walk
and the acorn.

And I kept it safe
so you'd be safe,
only now it looks
cracked and old;
not quite like an
acorn

and you are not
quite like you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Rone Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 6:52 PM
Strikingly poignant. Metaphoric beauty as only a skilled poet could craft. Thank you Sara.
Shepard Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 3:28 PM
Well done. This brought tears to my eyes. I saw, I felt... Thank you.
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 2:37 PM
This is a very beautiful poem! so touching! Love of a daughter for her father and years of memories for her and perhaps all wiped out for father!
Rees Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 8:59 AM
Ah, changes as we do the journey as best we can, reflecting on the bits that remain forever fresh . Your words are beautifully penned and so very apt.
Martin Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 3:26 AM
This poem reads like an epic. And the ending is really haunting-- the best cap on a poem I've read in a really long time. Favoriting.
Eastman Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 11:39 AM
You show your heart and touch on a subject known to many in a touching way. You are talented. I hope you keep writing.
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