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Ya'Ll Come Back

In those early years, growing up in the country
Walking barefoot, on old gravel roads
With neighborhood friends, a dog or two
Pulling a wagon of pop bottle gold

We were pirates, marauders, searching for treasure
In the ditches, as we walked, to the store
In simpler days, with much simpler ways
Soon, to pass in, to folklore

It had an old screen door, with a long squeaky spring
Which greeted you as you entered
Slapping shut behind you, with a distinctive,  CLAP!
Bringing the storekeeper front and center

While the old man figured, what was already known
We each grabbed a little paper sack
Just like 49'ers, digging for gold
We mined the penny candy rack

The thick gray planks, were buckled from age
Some held by a single nail
A few odd chairs, scattered about
Hosts to many an exaggerated tale

So many memories from that old porch
Telling stories and eating ice cream
Counting the cars, on the passing freight trains
Each one, hauling a different dream

Over a half a century, since those boyhood days
 But I can still hear that clicketty-clack 
Still taste the penny candy, see the old man smile
Hear him say," Thank you and ya'll come back.


    by Daniel Turner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marie Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 5:56 AM
A fantastic piece DT of times past that are priceless. Corner stores are becoming rarer by the day..your poem reminded me of a couple from my childhood, buying roe for fishing, butter to bring to grandma's house.:-) Nostalgia suits you... this is wonderful.:-) a fave, 7+ blessings, lynn
Roper Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 11:46 AM
Wonderful write, Daniel, I remember some of these old buildings and the sound of the door closing.... brought back memories . Hugs
Turner Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 10:34 AM
Funny the things we remember, isn't it, Mrs Eve:) Thank you so much for the friendly visits.
Curtis Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 5:56 AM
To bad we seem to have been the last generation to be able to truly appreciate the small stuff----to put a penny on the tracks----one should see Lincoln's face---It's a "7" my friend
Turner Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 10:33 AM
We used to find the little pieces on black metal banding around the tracks. You could fold them in half and make a whistle out of them. Great memories! Thank you, Jerry:)
Murray Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 4:29 PM
You just took me back to my childhood days Daniel. Dad ran a music store and Mum a pharmacy. Both small shops like the one you describe here. Nice reminiscing.
Turner Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 10:26 AM
It's great, isn't it? Those old memories have lasted a long time and get sweeter by the day. Thank you, Jean:)
Flats Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 11:01 AM
Deelightful! And a really good day was when the engineer would blow the horn for us, am I right? Cheers 'n chuckles ~ john
Turner Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 11:07 AM
That would be correct:) Thanks for the drive by, John:)
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January 24, 2017 at 6:29 PM
Very thoughtful and endearing poem, Daniel. Fond childhood memories tend to hold the most emotional value as the years pass. This was a beautiful rendering of your childhood recollections. Emotionally touching poetry. Ty for sharing. Love and peace to you.
Turner Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 9:53 AM
Thank you, Freddie. The longer I live, the more value they have. Now, I can even look back at the not so good times and still take pleasure.
Ball Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 4:50 PM
I love this Daniel. It brings back fond memories of my own childhood growing up in the backwaters of Fla. Great rhyme, rhythm and balance. Wonderful imagery. A big 7 from me. God Bless and thanks for the memories. JB
Turner Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 9:50 AM
Florida huh? Been there many many times. When I was really young, I got a dollar each week for an allowance if I did all of my chores. In those days a dollar bought a lot. They are special memories, a little sad. Thank you for friendly visits Judy:)
Y. Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 1:59 PM
Hi Daniel, I really enjoyed this write. You took reader back in time, to simpler time with this nostalgic write. Thanks for sharing this gem:-) Alexis
Y. Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 2:57 PM
I may be too young. But I've heard the amazing stories:-) Alexis
Turner Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 2:42 PM
I know you are probably too young to know of such happenings but they were indeed simple pleasures in simple days. Thank you so much for your support and friendship, Alexis:)
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January 24, 2017 at 8:50 AM
Some of my fondest memories where in my Granddaddy's old country store! Exactly the same! You didn't live in Enon N.C. did you? Love this! Thanks for this one!
Turner Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 8:54 AM
No, but I have been through there:) Old country stores were the backbone of rural life. I think everyone has a story about their own old country store. My grandfather owned a grocery store too. Just not the one in this poem. Thanks Mike:)
Smith Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 8:32 PM
One of your best DT, it had to be one of the greatest of times to be a kid, the mid-fifties to early sixties. I wish I could re-live it all again...
Turner Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 8:54 PM
We just did:) Thank you, Charlie
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January 23, 2017 at 2:13 PM
Memories like this are treasures especially for grandchildren and their offspring who live in a different world than the one you grew up in. Because you describe in such detail they will understand what it felt like to live in those times. Keep writing these treasures for them Daniel, for all of us. ; ) 7
Turner Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 8:55 PM
Thank you, Mrs Connie. I miss those days:)
Downing  Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 1:00 PM
A sweet mermory telling Danny :)
Turner Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 8:56 PM
Thank you, Kina. I wish you had been there. We would have really had some laughs.
Hoffman Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 9:15 AM
What a great nostalgic poem Daniel; those certainly were the good old days!:)
Turner Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 8:58 PM
Thank you Mrs Cheryl. Yes they were:)
Daniel Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 8:02 AM
Really a great poem that makes one nostalgic:) you brought those good ol' days back to life, a 7:)
Turner Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 9:01 PM
Thank you, Jo. You're too young to remember, silly:)
Green Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 7:26 AM
What a wonderful poetic journey back to the days when life moved just a little bit slower. Nicely done Daniel.
Turner Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 9:02 PM
Probably a little before your time, Chris. There was good and bad, we just didn't know about it:) Kinda like the song "Curtis Lowe"
Allison Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 4:22 PM
lovely memories Daniel:-) hugs Jan xx
Turner Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 9:09 PM
Yes Mrs Jan. Some of them, anyway. If only you had been there:) I'll bet you would have had a lot of fun, just as we did. Simple pleasures:)
Hamilton Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 3:28 PM
Great poem, of simpler times, and childhood memories, well done, definitely a 7.
Turner Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 3:18 PM
Thank you, John. I'll bet you made a few trips to an old country store at some point, Huh?
Sands Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 3:08 PM
Very Nice Daniel ! :)
Turner Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 3:20 PM
Have you always lived in New England, Heidi? Didn't you once say you lived in NH, or was it VT? Surely ya'll had some old country stores. Perhaps you're just too young:) Thank you for the friendly visit, Heidi.
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