Yakety Yak What Was That

You're scolding me, as if I care
For tearing up another pair!
But, "blah, blah, blah"..... is all that's clear
It's miscommunication in first gear!
Yakety Yak!!

Don't you see that it's no use??
I'm just a mutt, (that's my excuse)...
Those scalding words you shout to me?
For floppy ears? ...... Eluding me!
All I hear is "Yakety yak"!!! 

What's with that??

You get upset when I bark loud
Or when I jump into the crowd
That time I chewed newspapers on the floor
Or when I jumped through the screen door

Yakety Yak!!!

You chased me once with that straw broom
Just because I wee-weed in the room
You keep on shouting this and that
But to me it's only "Yakety-yak"!!

What was that???!!!!!!



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For Tanya Harrigton's Contest "Dog Gone Tales"
8/6/10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 7/22/2012 10:07:00 PM
carrie, congratulations in Tanya Harrington, "Dog gone tales" contest.. have your self a good night. ;-) always~PD
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Date: 7/18/2012 6:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Tanya's "Dog Gone Tales" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2012 4:54:00 PM
congrats Carrie on a great win for this fine entry ..cute title too luv..
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Date: 7/17/2012 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie, on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 7/17/2012 12:05:00 PM
Carrie, just a quick congrats on your win..excellent..David
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Date: 7/17/2012 1:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Carrie I like this one a lot xx
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Date: 7/16/2012 8:39:00 PM
This is so cute, Carrie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/17/2010 9:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in Deborah Guzzi's contest " Summertime,Summertime, Sum, Sum, Summertime". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2010 2:59:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Carrie
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Date: 8/16/2010 8:21:00 PM
Loved it first time I saw it, and love it now. Congrats, CArrie. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/16/2010 7:56:00 PM
Great work as usual Carrie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/16/2010 7:18:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on another winning poem ..this time in Debbie's contest tonight.. amazing song.. super win.. great rewrite.. sweet success to enjoy.. with luv from Italy.. caio...
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Date: 8/7/2010 12:12:00 AM
Wofff woffff , Carrie and best of luck with your clever rhyme ...
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Date: 8/6/2010 8:41:00 PM
Hey, I like it, Carrie. It's a lot like mine, just shorter. And I LOVE how you related it from the dog's point of view! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/6/2010 1:51:00 PM
funny!! I can see the doggies singing this! LOL
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Date: 8/6/2010 11:52:00 AM
lol good one that song is silly
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Date: 8/6/2010 11:35:00 AM
Really funny, Carrie! Dogs probably would like to talk back. Maybe it would be fun to spend a day as a dog and try to interpret what human's are saying. The cats I had responded more to the emotion in my voice than my words, but they did come running when I called their names. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/6/2010 11:31:00 AM
Very cool Carrie.. a great re write of the old tune.. good luck in Debbie's contest.. My entry is "Fashion Plate".. on itsy bitsy teenie weenie yellow polka dot bikini.. fame...it was so fun to do this contest.. with luv...
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