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X-rated Yearnings And Beauty Caught Desire’s Excited Fancy, Guided Her Into the lair of Jealousy’s Kingdom, Lured and Manipulated the Nuances Of Perfection’s Quest, Roused the Sensual Torment of Uneasy Virtue, Wakened X-rated Yearning's Zest. 9/2/2014 for Shadow Hamilton Abecedarian Contest I was not able to discern any difference between the Abecedarian and ABC poetic forms.

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Date: 9/9/2014 2:27:00 PM
John, this is a nice example of an abecedarian poem. Amazingly done. Love Linda
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John Lawless
Date: 9/9/2014 8:03:00 PM
Thanks Linda, always appreciated
Date: 9/8/2014 2:09:00 PM
a nice poem John I wanted poems like the ones I placed 1st. you lost points with your single word lines enjoyable read congrats on HM and ty for your support
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John Lawless
Date: 9/9/2014 8:03:00 PM
Thanks for managing another good contest. I had some fun as it seems most did.
Date: 9/7/2014 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win John.
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Date: 9/7/2014 2:11:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations John:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/2/2014 2:58:00 PM
WOW!!! Superb! LOVED this! Is yearnings possessive there? Yearning's zest? Just wondering. I loved the whole piece. A tough form for me.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/2/2014 3:08:00 PM
My pleasure! :)
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John Lawless
Date: 9/2/2014 3:04:00 PM
OOPs, nice pick up on the Yearning's Eileen. Will make the adjustment. thanks for you continued support and input as always.
Date: 9/2/2014 1:58:00 PM
Great write good luck with the contest John. Hugs Jan xx
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