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X-Rayed

6/6/12 I've unfolded you upon a screen But what I see is confusing All of what I know is gone Has fled from the life of this scene Your light has darkened into off-white And my mind is raking in doubt Everything on the outside is erased Has sadly taken flight You are perfectly displayed Nothing dislocated, disclosed, dismayed You are perfectly X-rayed But some rays have gone astray You appears as you are And always will be

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Date: 7/11/2012 12:38:00 PM
It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today Laura. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the garden of inspiration and continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol
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