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Wrongful Imprisonment: a Screaming Man

a screaming man is led away to a cell - - his twin smirks for Susan’s Wrongful Imprisonment contest

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/15/2012 2:40:00 PM

Right on the button & you nailed it ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/14/2012 5:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wrongful Imprisonment" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Terry O'Leary

Date: 11/12/2012 4:00:00 PM

Great one, Jack! Congratulations on your win... Terry

Len Gasun

Date: 11/12/2012 12:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win my dear friend Jack! Cheers! Thank you also for your precious time visiting my work! Have a nice day! hugs, Leonora

Brittany Reynolds

Date: 11/11/2012 9:37:00 PM

I'm awful. I'm giggling at this poem. It's a good poem. I'm just awful.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/11/2012 6:38:00 PM

Oh it is very clear why this won first. very clever Jack. Congratulations. Hope the hurt from your great loss is lessening. Love, Joyce

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 11/11/2012 12:14:00 PM

Wonderful haiku...Fine settings...Nice going Jack...Congratulations on your superb win in this contest...

Abdul Malik

Date: 11/11/2012 11:33:00 AM

Terse and Telling!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/11/2012 10:30:00 AM

Good morning, Jack :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Wrongful Imprisonment or Sentenced " contest, deep subject... always~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/11/2012 10:26:00 AM

I'm glad Susan rated this high. It was a GREAT read.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/10/2012 6:38:00 PM

CONGRATS JACK LUV ON A SUPERB WRITE AND WORTHY TOP SPOT WIN MY FRIEND .. AWESOME PIECE..

Seren Roberts

Date: 11/10/2012 10:41:00 AM

wow thats good, congratulations....Seren

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 11/10/2012 9:38:00 AM

congratulations friend Jack for your grand win :) cheers!!!

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 11/5/2012 11:48:00 AM

Ingenious write Jack! Hugs

Joann Grisetti

Date: 11/5/2012 8:36:00 AM

So much drama packed into this little gem.

Kathryn Collins

Date: 10/26/2012 8:29:00 AM

Wow Jack. Nothing to say except "Bravo" for these brief, horror packed three lines. love, Kathy

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/24/2012 7:07:00 AM

wow, Jack this is powerful, and the possibilities scary..good luck in contest, could be the winner i think

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 10/23/2012 7:45:00 PM

Wrong twin!? Good write! Cynthia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/23/2012 4:14:00 PM

AWESOME SCENARIO JACK .. COULD ACTUALLY HAPPEN LUV .. BEST WISHES FOR BIG WIN..

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/23/2012 1:30:00 PM

Look alikes can have a downside too I guess. Such a neat verse to digest! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2012 1:24:00 PM

That was one mean twin..With a brother like him who would need an enemy..Enjoyed reading today..Sara

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 10/21/2012 12:07:00 PM

A wonderful write you have cleaverly penned Jack, best to you in the contest.~ Caryl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2012 11:08:00 AM

wow,you pulled it off AGAIN. how I wish I could be this clever!!!

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/21/2012 10:14:00 AM

nice Haiku friend Jack...good luck in the contest.. :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/21/2012 10:07:00 AM

What a beautifully wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed this incredibly delightful and deadly poem, ha ha! You sure do know how to write them! I hope your father is doing better Jack, sorry to hear about him being in the hospital! What a grand piece, Great Work!!