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Wrongful Imprisonment: a Screaming Man

a screaming man
is led away to a cell - -
his twin smirks

for Susan’s Wrongful Imprisonment contest

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Debbie Guzzi

November 15, 2012 at 2:40 PM

Right on the button & you nailed it ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 14, 2012 at 5:51 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wrongful Imprisonment" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Terry O'Leary

November 12, 2012 at 4:00 PM

Great one, Jack! Congratulations on your win... Terry

Len Gasun

November 12, 2012 at 12:04 AM

Congratulations on your super win my dear friend Jack! Cheers! Thank you also for your precious time visiting my work! Have a nice day! hugs, Leonora

Brittany Reynolds

November 11, 2012 at 9:37 PM

I'm awful. I'm giggling at this poem. It's a good poem. I'm just awful.

Joyce Johnson

November 11, 2012 at 6:38 PM

Oh it is very clear why this won first. very clever Jack. Congratulations. Hope the hurt from your great loss is lessening. Love, Joyce

Olusegun Arowolo

November 11, 2012 at 12:14 PM

Wonderful haiku...Fine settings...Nice going Jack...Congratulations on your superb win in this contest...

Abdul Malik Mandani

November 11, 2012 at 11:33 AM

Terse and Telling!

Poet Destroyer A

November 11, 2012 at 10:30 AM

Good morning, Jack :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Wrongful Imprisonment or Sentenced " contest, deep subject... always~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

November 11, 2012 at 10:26 AM

I'm glad Susan rated this high. It was a GREAT read.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 10, 2012 at 6:38 PM

CONGRATS JACK LUV ON A SUPERB WRITE AND WORTHY TOP SPOT WIN MY FRIEND .. AWESOME PIECE..

Seren Roberts

November 10, 2012 at 10:41 AM

wow thats good, congratulations....Seren

Bukang Liwayway

November 10, 2012 at 9:38 AM

congratulations friend Jack for your grand win :) cheers!!!

Cecilia Macfarlane

November 5, 2012 at 11:48 AM

Ingenious write Jack! Hugs

Joann Grisetti

November 5, 2012 at 8:36 AM

So much drama packed into this little gem.

Kathryn Collins

October 26, 2012 at 8:29 AM

Wow Jack. Nothing to say except "Bravo" for these brief, horror packed three lines. love, Kathy

Harry Horsman

October 24, 2012 at 7:07 AM

wow, Jack this is powerful, and the possibilities scary..good luck in contest, could be the winner i think

Cynthia Alvez

October 23, 2012 at 7:45 PM

Wrong twin!? Good write! Cynthia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 23, 2012 at 4:14 PM

AWESOME SCENARIO JACK .. COULD ACTUALLY HAPPEN LUV .. BEST WISHES FOR BIG WIN..

Elizabeth Wesley

October 23, 2012 at 1:30 PM

Look alikes can have a downside too I guess. Such a neat verse to digest! :)

Sara Kendrick

October 21, 2012 at 1:24 PM

That was one mean twin..With a brother like him who would need an enemy..Enjoyed reading today..Sara

Caryl Muzzey

October 21, 2012 at 12:07 PM

A wonderful write you have cleaverly penned Jack, best to you in the contest.~ Caryl

Andrea Dietrich

October 21, 2012 at 11:08 AM

wow,you pulled it off AGAIN. how I wish I could be this clever!!!

Bukang Liwayway

October 21, 2012 at 10:14 AM

nice Haiku friend Jack...good luck in the contest.. :)

Russell Sivey

October 21, 2012 at 10:07 AM

What a beautifully wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed this incredibly delightful and deadly poem, ha ha! You sure do know how to write them! I hope your father is doing better Jack, sorry to hear about him being in the hospital! What a grand piece, Great Work!!

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