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Wrong Gift

WRONG GIFT I gave him glass so he could see Much further and with clarity A focused lens which magnifies Binoculars for his teenage eyes But gave it I to him or me? I thought to share the sights, just we - The stars, the birds up in the tree: To see the wonders of the skies I gave him glass. But he was even then too free To dabble thus with imagery - His int’rest in practical lies And later won many a prize. I gave an illusory spree - I gave him glass. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Entered in Cyndi MacMillan’s Contest GIFTS GIVEN, GIFTS RECEIVED. A RONDEAU . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Note This is the real story of a gift I once gave at Christmas to my then fourteen year old son, whose interests I clearly misjudged at the time. He almost never used the binoculars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/9/2012 3:31:00 AM
Good Rondeau Sid. Congrats on your win.One Love~O.O.
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Date: 1/6/2012 5:58:00 PM
He tricked you the dad..Enjoyed..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 1/5/2012 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Cyndi's~ "Gifts Given--Received" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2012 10:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM Sydney
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Date: 1/4/2012 7:18:00 PM
Congrats Sydney on your Win.Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 12/31/2011 10:43:00 PM
Nice write here Sydney.Wish you a very very Happy New Year.
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Date: 12/31/2011 8:58:00 AM
very often one comes across situations like this while dealing with children, nice write..
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Date: 12/31/2011 4:49:00 AM
Sorry by I have to smile ..... HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU SIDNEY. oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/30/2011 6:09:00 PM
This is perfect. Wonderful Sydney.
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Date: 12/30/2011 1:13:00 PM
Sounds like my son and me. We were always polar opposites in every thing. We had a little trouble relating to each other until he was grown. We seem to understand each other better now. Great write!
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Date: 12/30/2011 1:11:00 PM
A nice way to remember and save the memory in verse. Enjoyed
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