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Written In Immortality

I open my mouth and no words come out There seems to be amazement written here She has stunned me yet again with her looks I know in her heart she surely does care She speaks to me with such love towards me I could not say even a single word I’m in awe with her beauty, with her soul I approach her, give her a hug forward She knows me, sees what I wanted to say And whispers into my ear, such sweetness I move in for the kill, and grab her warmth She sighs heavy, now she wants my weakness As one we fly to the bed, getting nude And fireworks expressed themselves tonight She sure became the most beautiful girl Exhausted we lay holding very tight I now find my words and I write them down Poetry flows like magic in the air Passion is formulated in each line I show love to her by my write I share And now we are unified through these words Unbroken bond of immortality Soothing are the lines within my poem Forever our love written, endlessly
Russell Sivey Entered into Poet Destroyer A's "Make me smile ----old/new poems" contest 3/7/2013

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Date: 3/18/2013 1:04:00 PM
Russell, congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/15/2013 5:17:00 AM
belated congratulations onyoue win on this amazing write! Lori
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Date: 3/14/2013 7:04:00 PM
Well done Russell :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
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Date: 3/13/2013 8:05:00 PM
Congrats, Russ. Excellent. Well done. Ralph
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Date: 3/10/2013 10:40:00 PM
Wonderful write and win. Many Congrats.
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Date: 3/10/2013 9:10:00 AM
This is indeed a stellar write and masterpiece with a very lovely image my dear friend and favorite poet, Russell! I like it so much! My big big hearty congratulations on your well-deserved fantastic win! Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time stopping by on my poem, leaving me wonderful and inspiring comments! More power and blessings to you always! Have a great weekend! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/9/2013 7:37:00 PM
Russell. thank you for the nice and simple smile :-) "CONGRATULATIONS!" and goodnight xox...PD
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Date: 3/7/2013 4:37:00 PM
nicely done poet. Hey if you have time look at a new poet Margherita Russo
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Date: 3/7/2013 1:55:00 PM
good one Russ..best of luck. Light & Love
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Date: 3/7/2013 12:04:00 PM
Well and all the best from here Russell, love it xx
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Date: 3/7/2013 9:14:00 AM
Well, my friend an excellent romantic poem! I have enjoyed it very much! Good luck! Help given!
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Date: 3/7/2013 3:13:00 AM
Russell an excellent romantic write, I love it...David
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