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Writing In the Fast Lane

Writing in the fast lane only produces something worthwhile, If it has been thought about in the slow lane.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/25/2020 5:37:00 PM

Hello David Smith, believe it or not this makes sense to me. Have a nice evening my friend. Be safe.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/27/2020 12:24:00 PM

Hello David Smith, When I lived in a town, i use to go picking strawberries. i miss that. Yes we do have our own path to create.Something hastily prepared would be sqtisfactory once in awhile.Your welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. Be safe.

David Smith
Date: 4/25/2020 6:35:00 PM

Thanks Darlene. We each have own path to creating something worthwhile but my personal experience suggests something hastily prepared is less likely to be satisfactory. We are having a late summer here in Wainuiomata Lower Hutt, still getting strawberries in garden which is unusual. Thanks for reading, best regards David in NZ

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/19/2020 9:27:00 PM

Yes indeed well said,

David Smith
Date: 1/19/2020 10:10:00 PM

Thank you Pixie. I am still working on my one or two liners. Nice to get feedback. There are a number on the soup who are very good at these. Regards David in NZ