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Writing and Revision

Every writer produces garbage, from time to time, Stupid, embarrassing, awful stuff. And despite what some poets seem to think, Grammar is not a dirty word Nor is it deadly to creative inspiration. Revision is a process that has no clear ending point. It is a difficult, demanding, and dangerous work That is absolutely necessary For a poet who cares about his craft. But it is well to remember That not all revisions become successful poems, And also well to remember That a work of art is rarely finished, Merely abandoned.

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Date: 4/6/2024 9:27:00 PM
So true, Jim. And just love the ending of this poem. ~ Phor Lorne
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 4/7/2024 9:41:00 AM
G. thanks so much.
Date: 4/6/2024 8:07:00 PM
I am always learning, I think I write many lines of garbage, but I try! Aysha
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Date: 4/7/2024 9:41:00 AM
Thanks, Aysha, and good for you. Trying is the best way to learn and to improve. And if you can make a fair and unbiased evaluation of your own work...you're ahead of the game.
Date: 4/6/2024 9:04:00 AM
I agree with your sentiments Jim, I am never satisfied with what I write.. but time is my nemesis... so I just post for fun rather than taking it seriously..
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 4/6/2024 10:18:00 AM
Yes, S O...but aren't you "serious" about that "fun"? Thanks for taking the time to peruse this scribbling.
Date: 4/5/2024 4:21:00 PM
So true. I consider Poe's Untimely Demise to be my masterpiece, but I've been revising it for years. Never quite satisfied but maybe I should be. Heck, it ain't earning me any $$.
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Date: 4/6/2024 10:16:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. I just read "Poe's Untimely Demise", Tom, and I can easily see why you feel that so strongly about it. And you shouldn't be too concerned about the "money" aspect, either...I believe Mr. Poe had some difficulty in that department before his writings started to bring home any bacon.
Date: 4/5/2024 10:49:00 AM
Ha! Love the ending, Jim! Well said! (I admit to not revising as much as I should, but if I really hate the way something comes out, I won’t post it, so that’s something, at least…)
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 4/5/2024 1:06:00 PM
It is, indeed! Thanks, Ilene.

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