Writing and Revision

Every writer produces garbage, from time to time,
Stupid, embarrassing, awful stuff.
And despite what some poets seem to think,
Grammar is not a dirty word
Nor is it deadly to creative inspiration.
Revision is a process that has no clear ending point.
It is a difficult, demanding, and dangerous work
That is absolutely necessary
For a poet who cares about his craft.
But it is well to remember
That not all revisions become successful poems,
And also well to remember
That a work of art is rarely finished,
Merely abandoned.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 9:27 PM
So true, Jim. And just love the ending of this poem. ~ Phor Lorne
Slaughter Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 9:41 AM
G. thanks so much.
Nuwas Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 8:07 PM
I am always learning, I think I write many lines of garbage, but I try! Aysha
Slaughter Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 9:41 AM
Thanks, Aysha, and good for you. Trying is the best way to learn and to improve. And if you can make a fair and unbiased evaluation of your own work...you're ahead of the game.
One Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 9:04 AM
I agree with your sentiments Jim, I am never satisfied with what I write.. but time is my nemesis... so I just post for fun rather than taking it seriously..
Slaughter Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 10:18 AM
Yes, S O...but aren't you "serious" about that "fun"? Thanks for taking the time to peruse this scribbling.
Bauer Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 10:49 AM
Ha! Love the ending, Jim! Well said! (I admit to not revising as much as I should, but if I really hate the way something comes out, I won’t post it, so that’s something, at least…)
Slaughter Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 1:06 PM
It is, indeed! Thanks, Ilene.
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