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I try to be humble
when it comes to evaluating poetry,
reminding myself, that my penned gems
may seem paste to others – addicted
to cuneiform glitter, my mining deeply within
our shared reality tunnels sometimes left mere holes 
for better landscapers forced to fill in – the dirt
I scatter to the surface,
the rocks, thousands of years' old boulders
pulverized for dear expediency, justifying actions by
use of strong verbs and a lot of campie adjectives – 
the new normal, I am told, nouns are fluid...
I guess, the rain piss, and the sun an insidious thirst
for those shunning government sanctioned kool-aid
to drink, like myself, finding shelter in the holes we
have dug for self and others, calling them natural
abodes, or bypass for an earth
desperately in need of new moral 
arteries – Well...having belittled who
I am and what I do, for me, my pen yet lingers
a rod and staff of sorts, a pacifier habitually in search
of divine nipples....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 1/28/2023 5:42:00 AM
I must say that you are too humble Joe. You never realize how potent you are as a poet. Your depth and diction always leave me spell bound and I can never write the type of poems you write. Be assured that your poetry is first rate and frankly speaking, a little complex for my level. Stay confident, dear poet friend.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/28/2023 12:50:00 PM
Well...you really made my day, Valsa; my year! Bless you.
Date: 1/23/2023 3:29:00 PM
Joe, that is the biggest conundrum l have ever seen ! To wright a superb poem like that, to say that you have to belittle yourself as a writer, is mighty confusing !! You are a fine poet Joe, The reason l follow Soup members is because l see the wonder in their poems. Oh look you are on my followed list !!!! ( love the pacifier bit...we call them dummys over here,, doesn't have the same ring to it, does it ?) Cheers Wen
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/23/2023 6:37:00 PM
Hi Wen; thank you. Just playing around with different ideas from different perspectives. I really do like myself...somewhat:) Blessings my friend.
Date: 1/23/2023 1:41:00 PM
Joe! Don’t belittle yourself. Their is greatness in others, too. We may think it is not there.. I know you love writing~ it is one of your passions. But…wake it up, in your own way. Pangie xx
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/23/2023 6:38:00 PM
Thank you, Pangie; I will take your word for it. Blessings my friend.
Date: 1/23/2023 11:41:00 AM
Great thought provoking poem Joe :)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/23/2023 6:39:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi; this was fun subject to explore. Blessings my friend.
Date: 1/23/2023 9:03:00 AM
Who says you cannot write. Loved this poem.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/23/2023 9:06:00 AM
Hi Victor; you made my day. Blessings!

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