Wrinkle Goop

Before I go to bed at night,
I slather on my face
Some creamy goop that promises
My wrinkles will erase.

Of course it doesn’t work, or else
We’d all look twenty-one.
There’s no way to remove those lines
Once aging has begun.

And yet those products sell like mad
‘Cause every woman’s dream
Is that she can look younger
With a little nightly cream.

I’m way too scared for surgery
And not quite Botox-vain,
So even with my bedtime rite
My creases all remain.

You’d think I would have given up
Since brains I do possess,
But maybe there’s the slightest chance
Those crinkles will loom less.

So I surrender to the hype
Although I know the truth –
No salve or lotion can restore
That lovely skin of youth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Debole Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 6:11 PM
Hi Ilene- Another poem I've enjoyed! I've surrendered as well to the hype, but I do believe that the lotions are helping because of advances in this area as long as I keep using them. The darn wrinkles seem to grow quickly if I don't use lotion for one day.
Dietrich Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 5:51 PM
Ilene, maybe I am more blessed than others, but I have used face creams for years now. I heard that you should look for the ones with Retinol. I have some little wrinkles under my eyes, but at 56, the rest of my face is pretty clear of them. It helps that I had greasy skin as a teen. I guess you live your youth with pimples if you are like me, but then the skin doesn't dry out much as you age!! I enjoyed this. Luv, Andrea
Susan Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 3:45 PM
so true, but we can hope can't we? the power of the mind right? :)
Gorelick Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 2:36 PM
You got me on a very wrinkly day..but I had to laugh at myself when I read your poem. Great! BG
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 1:17 PM
You have given me laugh with this one. Most women can relate. I have found daily sunscreen use to be the most effective regimen against wrinkles. Thanks for sharing today. I enjoyed the read
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