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Wrapped In Candy Love

Peek-a-boos winking coyly, Ruffled by young love’s spell… A nectarine touch, a candy-cheek kiss Breaths scattering on moonbeams; Wrapped in a daze of lost innocence. Casarah Nance's Contest: Micropoetry Ain't that tweet 8/3/2015 ~ about 129 letters, et al

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 10/6/2016 7:52:00 AM

Very nice...I like the part about the candy-cheek kiss :^) Nice poem! MC

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2015 9:36:00 PM

very descriptive one. Too bad she did not mention the spaces as being counted. Lucky for me, I did mine very short anyway!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2015 4:18:00 PM

((())) Puppy Love Congrats! :>) SK..Thanks for stopping by..

James Inman

Date: 8/7/2015 8:32:00 AM

What a beautiful poem, Nette. Sweet, blissful nievette.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/7/2015 8:23:00 AM

I do enjoy how you expressed this theme. Congratulations Nette.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/7/2015 4:40:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 8/7/2015 1:11:00 AM

A lovely little poem, regardless of the contest, Nette. Well done. Viv x

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/7/2015 12:22:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning brilliant write nette!I think u could not put a stop to ur emotional flow n pen!

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/6/2015 8:16:00 PM

Oh you have such beautiful words, unfortunatly it went over the character count for the contest but still I loved it!

James Fraser

Date: 8/4/2015 4:07:00 PM

Gorgeously sweet in gorging passion, nice one Nette. Good luck in the contest, hugs//James :) :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/3/2015 1:54:00 PM

A marvelous display of emotions as one is led upon a trail of discovery. Emile. #7

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/3/2015 10:28:00 AM

Well, isn't this just sweet!!! :) You have such a way to describe things, my dear....Lovely. Good luck in the contest.

Aiyah Torres

Date: 8/3/2015 10:08:00 AM

I just love the way you mixed all ingredients of sweets in one beautiful poem! .. you hit it ,nette! :O))

Darlene Gifford

Date: 8/3/2015 10:00:00 AM

Stock full of sweet images. Reminds me of when I was young and after the candy was gone, there was still the wrapper to lick! Good luck. ~~Darlene

Constance La France

Date: 8/3/2015 9:06:00 AM

Nette, a sweet enchanting and charming write for the contest, a candy kiss 7 and I want to thank you so much for my placement in your, Complete The Lines Contest, I am very honored ~~

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/3/2015 8:51:00 AM

You penned this a great, I love it, good luck in the contest.........A.M.