Nette Onclaud Poet Verse

Wrapped In Candy Love

Peek-a-boos winking coyly,

Ruffled by young love’s spell…

A nectarine touch, a candy-cheek kiss

Breaths scattering on moonbeams;

Wrapped in a daze

of lost innocence. 



Casarah Nance's Contest: Micropoetry
Ain't that tweet
8/3/2015
~ about 129 letters, et al

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper October 6, 2016 at 7:52 AM Very nice...I like the part about the candy-cheek kiss :^) Nice poem! MC

Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2015 at 9:36 PM very descriptive one. Too bad she did not mention the spaces as being counted. Lucky for me, I did mine very short anyway!!

Sara Kendrick August 7, 2015 at 4:18 PM ((())) Puppy Love Congrats! :>) SK..Thanks for stopping by..

James Inman August 7, 2015 at 8:32 AM What a beautiful poem, Nette. Sweet, blissful nievette.

Richard Lamoureux August 7, 2015 at 8:23 AM I do enjoy how you expressed this theme. Congratulations Nette.

Jan Allison August 7, 2015 at 4:40 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley August 7, 2015 at 1:11 AM A lovely little poem, regardless of the contest, Nette. Well done. Viv x

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 7, 2015 at 12:22 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning brilliant write nette!I think u could not put a stop to ur emotional flow n pen!

Casarah Nance August 6, 2015 at 8:16 PM Oh you have such beautiful words, unfortunatly it went over the character count for the contest but still I loved it!

James Fraser August 4, 2015 at 4:07 PM Gorgeously sweet in gorging passion, nice one Nette. Good luck in the contest, hugs//James :) :)

Emile Pinet August 3, 2015 at 1:54 PM A marvelous display of emotions as one is led upon a trail of discovery. Emile. #7

Eileen Manassian August 3, 2015 at 10:28 AM Well, isn't this just sweet!!! :) You have such a way to describe things, my dear....Lovely. Good luck in the contest.

Aiyah Torres August 3, 2015 at 10:08 AM I just love the way you mixed all ingredients of sweets in one beautiful poem! .. you hit it ,nette! :O))

Darlene Gifford August 3, 2015 at 10:00 AM Stock full of sweet images. Reminds me of when I was young and after the candy was gone, there was still the wrapper to lick! Good luck. ~~Darlene

Constance La France August 3, 2015 at 9:06 AM Nette, a sweet enchanting and charming write for the contest, a candy kiss 7 and I want to thank you so much for my placement in your, Complete The Lines Contest, I am very honored ~~

Afolabi Muideen August 3, 2015 at 8:51 AM You penned this a great, I love it, good luck in the contest.........A.M.

Ravi Sathasivam August 3, 2015 at 8:16 AM Very adorable poem. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2015 at 8:00 AM - It sounds sweet and delicious - * - A beautiful poem, Nette - Good luck in the contest - Happy new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rora Onna August 3, 2015 at 7:58 AM Absolutely adorable poem. I love it and felt like I was in my big crush moment. Sweetness !

Jan Allison August 3, 2015 at 7:57 AM wow what imagery Nette this is breathtaking - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan x