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Woven Worlds - Long version

Tumultuous excitement to think of actually having an 
address on the moon. Needing to be quite self sufficient, 
as there will be no ordering Take-Away from ground control.
Prefab housing and inflatable furniture will be all the go.
It will have to be weighed it down, as we don’t want it to get up 
and go with no gravity. Tubes of food and drink, will need 
to be stocked by the mile. Living on the moon will cause 
quite a smile, thanks to those first brave astronauts.
              their mission was soon
                           it was to land on the moon
                                             came more to explore
                               could we build a colony                
      where we could all survive there

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Date: 3/15/2024 7:11:00 AM
Interesting and fun write Wen. I hold a certain fascination of the Moon. GL my friend! :)
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Date: 3/15/2024 5:19:00 PM
It was a fun competition .. Not sure if this is on target but I had fun.. Thanx Laf Always love your comments
Date: 3/11/2024 8:35:00 AM
Humorous, creative, I just love everything about this, gives a new world feel, good vibes! A beautiful collaboration you did with Sam Scott, Wen. I'd love to hear your voice recite your poetry, plz.
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Date: 3/11/2024 6:29:00 PM
Aha, a good reason not to audio. I was searching for woven world stuff. I know she calls for prose and only 0ne Tanka. Best not to knock your work out of the game, some will believe it. I think this is very exciting! I may try it.
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Date: 3/11/2024 10:31:00 AM
Lost my voice about 18 months ago dear Anaya. I struggle to breathe most of the time. very few can understand me. All good, my fingers do the talking. this was my best interpretation of Suzettes Contest. I am sure its not what she is looking for but best I could come up with. Thanks for your lovely comment my sweet friend.
Date: 3/11/2024 6:01:00 AM
Neat poem. I like scifi themes. Of course, I've always believed the notion of a moon colony is silly. Even if one could be built, who would want to live there? Poker gets old after awhile ;)
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Date: 3/11/2024 6:14:00 AM
Have you read Suzettes criteria for her contest ? I would live anywhere if I thought I was close to the mark with her contest. ( Which I don't think I am ) but I tried !!! lol Thanks for commenting Tom. Come back to commiserate when I get an N/A Best wishes Wen
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