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Wounds From Utopia

Inside stays the thought of you, quietly To the outer horizon of my mind I've reach this barren edge so silently And found this fabric of space so unkind Beyond the yearning of a clumsy fool The game played with evil timely forethought When heated passion relinquished its jewel And all the ravaged hearts were finally caught Emptiness surrounds the frosted glass heart And darkness hears oak rain fall from faces Walls once sturdy, now a guarded rampart Lost in passing time's invisible traces A fractured heart when warm can finally mend Will loneliness bring learning, if a friend? For the contest ..Poems ending with a question Sponsored by Nathan A

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Date: 3/23/2014 6:44:00 PM
This is wonderful Fredric...I love the line "Emptiness surrounds the frosted glass heart" .....Tim
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/23/2014 6:49:00 PM
thank you Tim for reading and for your kindness

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