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Would You Still Love Me If I Wasn'T a Poet?

Would you still love me If I wasn't a poet? If I was not a climbing jasmine on your window-sill, a rose-bud in bloom, the soft zephyr breeze on an early afternoon. Would you still love me If I was not the sunrise in your day, the sunset in your smile, a lavender in your grey. Would you still love me If the world of Oz I didn't give to you, If all mermaids vanished in the deepest blue. Would you still love me If the calm and gentle rain was nothing more than tears of pain, If the sound of our laughter was never heard again, Would you call my name? Would you still love me? Would you still love me If I bid farewell to fantasies, Acted just the way I am, not as a pretty princess, but as a simple island girl. A fiery stubborn lady, like those ladies from your past, with problems,and struggles, with a voice against injustice, A protest made to last. Would you still love me If the little clown in me jumped off to be set free, If you saw beyond songbirds and fairies, Would you still love the scar engraved in me, I carry daily heartaches wherever I will be, Am I too much to handle Could you still love me? Would you still love me f I wasn't a poet in a magic world of verdant trees, If you faced my silly moods and my odd realities. Could you still love me? when the glow upon my face like a moon-jar wears a shadow, slowly sinks and fades. Would you still want me? When my noichette hair turns white as snow, my bones would become fragile, my wrinkles make me whole. Could you,still love me, When I become an old bore, If my hands shake and tremble, If I fail to remember, Could you care a little bit more? Could I curl within your arms Would you hold me by your side Could I find you in the stars on that cold and lonely night. Would you still love me If love was all I have All verses kept unwritten, All words were left unsaid,. Could you still love me If never in a lifetime A poet I would be Could you Iook into my heart Tell me what you see.
Not for the Contest, but thanyou Silent One,your title was inspiring to me,and so the many poems I've read about the topic.
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Chircop Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 5:35 AM
Such an expressive poem! I love it :)
Beaufort Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 6:01 AM
Charmaine, you point out that we all have an inner core (heart) and a style that will always be there. Not what we accomplish, can do, or how we appear, but rather that which represents how we think of ourselves and others...our essence. So, you have me smiling this morning as I think about my own wife and our long-lasting love, for which the basis is our feelings and our time spent together. I've joked about seeing a prospective partner drunk at least once since we want to know what's there.
Edmonds  Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 7:05 PM
A beautiful write Charmaine, poet or not, in sure you’d be loved… Beryl
Situation Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 3:44 PM
A responce to Tom Woodys poem about you.
Orozco Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 12:21 PM
Loved it! :) miss u
Hamilton Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 11:29 AM
Welcome back Char. Loved it and the answer must be yes. Faved.
Chircop Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 6:48 PM
Thnaks so much for reading and for your welcome.
Inman Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 7:55 AM
A beautifully emotional write filled with thought provoking images.
Chircop Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 8:33 AM
Thanks so much
Goff Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 9:49 PM
Goodness Char...each stanza builds deeper and deeper into feminine truth... love it .. James
Chircop Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 8:34 AM
Thanks so muxh for reading
DiMino Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 1:57 PM
"Could you still love me? when the glow upon my face like a moon-jar wears a shadow, slowly sinks and fades." Beautiful imagery. Love needs not be asked, needs no affirmation but its presence. And poetry need not be written nor recited...but it must be lived!
Callus Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 12:42 PM
Wow...after reading the beauty and sincerity of your words, who would be so cold-hearted as to leave you in the lurch!! The simple island girl and poetess has much to offer. ~ Regards to you and yours :) // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
October 4, 2023 at 6:39 AM
Absolutely, but I’m glad you are a poet. Your skills shine in this piece. Hugs Rick.
Nuwas Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 12:31 AM
Very beautiful poetry, I love this style of poetry.
Chircop Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 10:01 AM
Thanks so much Dear Alexis
Chircop Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 10:01 AM
Aysha..Sorry??
Rose  Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 3:31 PM
Oh the amazing things one would see looking in your heart of gold Charma, lovely patterns amazing flourishes, who could not love one such as you :)
Chircop Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 10:01 AM
Hi sweet lady.How lovely to see you again.Thanks so much for your kind words .
Y. Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 12:30 PM
WoW! Charma, You are a remarkable poet and person. I'm sure your beloved would still love you no matter what. This gem was just beautiful and well-written. I've missed your talented pen and I'm elated that you are posting again. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
Chircop Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 12:38 AM
Hi Alexis,so wonderful to see you're still here on Ps.Thanks so much for stopping by. my simple post..Truly grateful.Hppe you are doing fine.
Andresen Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 1:33 AM
- What a beautiful poem, Charma ... the sunrise and the sunset are always in your smile :) - hugs
Chircop Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 12:38 AM
Thanks so much sweet lady .
Babcock Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 10:36 AM
This is so beautiful it is going into a fav. Silent one also has beautiful poems. So well written and poses a question would you still love me for what I am. Awesome. love phyl
Chircop Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 12:39 AM
Thanks so much ,greatly appreciated lovely lady
Williams Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 3:54 AM
How lovely to see you back and posting your wonderful poetry here, Charmaine. I was just going to say good luck in the contest, however, I see you are not entering. I adore these lines... Would you still love me If I wasn't a poet? If I was not a climbing jasmine on your window-sill, a rose-bud in bloom, the soft zephyr breeze on an early afternoon. Love and Hugs
Chircop Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 12:40 AM
Hi Dear Maria,trying to return on PS..Thanks so much for reading, for your encouragement and support..Big Hugs.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 12:50 PM
I see your pen still sparkles in this very beautifully painted piece
Chircop Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 12:40 AM
Thanks Liam,thanks for reading and for your encouragement. Trying to find my feet back here at the soup family.
Anaya Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 2:16 PM
A trophy winner, Charmaine. I shall treasure your beautiful Lyrical poetry by faving. I do agree with Ink Empress, this could be my favorite ballad, I would memorize the chorus and sing it all day! ;D Romantic and smacks true. xhugs~. Anaya
Chircop Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 12:41 AM
Aw..Thanks so much sweet lady.Looking forward to reading you too.
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 10:00 PM
If all mermaids vanished, and i am nothing but a simple island girl, those lines resonate with me as i too am an island girl. I love the opening lines in this so much , jasmine line and how you said “sunrise in your day” “ sunset in your smile “ truly you are so poetic. U call yr poems simple, but i say its evocative touching n creative. This sounds like a beautiful song. Silent one inspires many. And u wrote very well for his prompt. This is one of the best iv read for his prompt. Keep shining
Chircop Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 12:43 AM
Thanks so much sweet lady,thanks for your support.So happy to meet another island girl on this site..Looking forward to read more of your poems.
Poetry Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 5:34 PM
We all have many different sides and it would be a sin to not love them all.
Chircop Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 12:43 AM
So very true,and thanks so much for reading
Pandit Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 3:47 PM
Wonderfully expressive poem, Charmaine. Your quest for answers are in your heart that that wrote this poem so beautifully. Love that is true will always be there.
Chircop Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 12:44 AM
Thanks so very much .Your comment is greatly appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 1:13 PM
You always do so well with romantic and wistful poetry, Charma. This is certainly no exception. I guess this contest closed out?? but did it get judged? I can't even remember. it would have been a top winner, that's for sure.
Chircop Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 3:08 PM
Yes it closed Dear Andrea..I just liked the title and the poems I was reading,thought to write a poem about it,but for the fun of it ,not for the Contest. Thanks for your lovely comment. Xx
Peranteau Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 5:51 AM
I would still luv you if you had the beard ;) And yes, I've missed you! And now, you treat us with your bubbling thoughts! How happy i am! And how'z your princess precious woman? Noah iz 6'4" and twenty yearz old now....yikes....and he still loves hiz poppa! With regard this write uv your's dear 'poet'...you'll pass unto paradise with the crown of the poetess ;),,,have a wonderful season girlie....much love, james
Peranteau Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 5:06 PM
;)
Chircop Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 6:50 AM
Hi James,now the soup is feeling like family again,with all uncles and aunts gathering for a re-union.Oh Noah is 20,and so tall..Awesome.Time passes by so quickly.Christina is now 11. So glad to see you are still here on PS.I will visit your beautiful poetry shortly.Big hugs for the little one who is not as little anymore,smiles.:)
Downing  Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 8:21 PM
Charmaine, welcome back. And what a beautiful and romantic poem. People will love you for who are. Poet or not. :)
Chircop Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 11:11 PM
That's so very sweet of you..Thanks for your kind comment.Thanks for reading. : )
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