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Would You Still Love Me If

If I didn't drip honey from my tongue each time I drew you close, would I still leave immutable marks upon your heart my love? If this holiest of grail this mouth of mine spoke the art of love to you with the ingress of a mime would you feel the essence of what I was meant to say to you, through this un-pierceable, silence; If I never learnt to write a poem or share one single line through yielding quill or bleeding ink, would you allow me to show you my brailing thoughts and take you to the summit, despite my unspoken word. Would you still love me, if I wasn't a poet or if my words were silent ships sailing through the open sky, then would you accompany me mute, or whisper me goodbye ! If we touched the harbor of each other's thoughts, could we then be love and share each other's truth, unspoken side by side, like two silent masts.

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Ink Empress

Date: 9/16/2023 1:29:00 AM

“If my words were silent ships sailing through the open sky” wow! What a line, and love that line about bleeding ink too, and depth of your heart and soul woven as words here is impeccable and moving. So touching and resonates strongly. I can see why this was placed as first place winner. You’ve really written so well for the prompt. The elegance and smoothness of your words flowing throughout this is soulfully divine. Congratulations on winning dear talented poetess. You are amazing

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/14/2023 6:26:00 AM

Huge Congratulations, Dear Poet, on your brilliant win. Your images "unspoken side by side, like two silent masts." are just stunning! "un-pierceable, silence;" - how deep pictures! Your Poem is a gem! Love ~ Mala

Silent One

Date: 9/13/2023 12:23:00 PM

Vienna my friend, I really loved the flow to your poem.. So many wonderful verses here.. I really liked the line, 'through yielding quill or bleeding ink, would you allow me to show you my brailing thoughts.... and if we touched the harbor of each others thoughts... just loved how your used harbor of thoughts.. so poetic... So happy you were inspired by my contest and I think he would love you regardles....

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/13/2023 6:32:00 PM

I am so honored thank you for my placement dear Silent One

Silent One
Date: 9/13/2023 12:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 9/13/2023 8:56:00 AM

How I missed the immense delight and the wonder of reading the gem you carved of your genuinely gifted quill and you skillfully brightened it with your so true and deep feelings! You just the crystal beauty and the captivating fragrance of Mystic Rose! So much touched by your impressive work dear poetess! Congratulations on your top placement and so much pleased and honoured to share with the journey of enlivening and amazing poetry.. God bless you. Best regards.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/13/2023 2:35:00 AM

Wonderful writing. Congrats on your top win. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/4/2023 6:06:00 AM

Oh, what an impeccable and heartfelt take for the contest, dear.. I absolutely love how you've painted eloquent and picturesque imageries, whilst weaving evocative feelings between them.. "Spoke the art of love to you with the ingress of a mime", "if we touched the harbour of each other's thoughts" How delicate and profound! Absolutely love this! :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/3/2023 7:54:00 AM

what a lovely, elegantly written piece! i love that second line :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/1/2023 8:18:00 PM

Lovely, profoundly beautiful poetry. Love needs no affirmation but its presence. Could not have been said better. Wonderful poetry.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/1/2023 4:51:00 AM

If we touched the harbor of each other's thoughts---spoken like a poet. Beautiful poetry, Vienna.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/1/2023 1:01:00 PM

without words would we know it, only the most intimate of lovers receive each others knowledges, sometimes we need words, other times we don't need words at all. :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/31/2023 11:49:00 PM

Good thing you are married, or I'd be moving in tomorrow! yes I loved this poem sweet and romantic, :)

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/1/2023 1:00:00 PM

Yes happily married Arthur, what a blessing, just loosing my romantic ribbons here. :)