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Would You Still Love Me

Would you still love me Would you still love me? And seek for me If I am the drop in ocean Lean on my edges When thorny bushes outgrow on them Would you still love me? Sandstorm rising within me Pricks your eyes blurring you I am at the farthest shores Drifting apart each moment Would you still love me? If I am lost in oblivion I am the deep dark woodlands in tears I lie breathless beneath permafrost My demons defeat me Would you still love me? Or the musty book at your study table Left unopened for unending time I'm the smudged fate of last love letter That never reached it's destination Would you still love me? If I am your darkest destiny I'm the ancient tree waiting for it's final fall And if I don't love you till my last breath Tell me can you sustain your love for me 16/12/2018 Sponsor - Edward Ibeh

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Date: 12/25/2018 12:25:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win top. Each line has a specific poetic touch. Heartiest wishes for happy New Year.
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Date: 12/25/2018 11:29:00 AM
Thank you for taking part in my contest, Purbasha!:-) Nicely done. Congratulations on your win, and Merry Christmas to you!
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 12/25/2018 8:17:00 PM
Thank you Sir.Belated Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Date: 12/25/2018 11:29:00 AM
These "Would You Still Love Me?" poems are very interesting, Purbasha. Congratulations on your win in Edward's contest. Merry Christmas, Carolyn
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Date: 12/25/2018 8:18:00 PM
Thank you for your kind wishes.Belated Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

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