Would You Still Love Me

Would you still love me 

Would you still love me?
And seek for me
If I am the drop in ocean
Lean on my edges
When thorny bushes outgrow on them

Would you still love me?
Sandstorm rising within me
Pricks your eyes blurring you
I am at the farthest shores
Drifting apart each moment

Would you still love me?
If I am lost in oblivion
I am the deep dark woodlands in tears
I lie breathless beneath permafrost 
My demons defeat me

Would you still love me?
Or the musty book at your study table 
Left unopened for unending time
I'm the smudged fate of last love letter
That never reached it's destination

Would you still love me?
If I am your darkest destiny
I'm the ancient tree waiting for it's final fall
And if I don't love you till my last breath
Tell me can you sustain your love for me


16/12/2018
Sponsor - Edward Ibeh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/25/2018 12:25:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win top. Each line has a specific poetic touch. Heartiest wishes for happy New Year.
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Date: 12/25/2018 11:29:00 AM
Thank you for taking part in my contest, Purbasha!:-) Nicely done. Congratulations on your win, and Merry Christmas to you!
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Date: 12/25/2018 8:17:00 PM
Thank you Sir.Belated Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Date: 12/25/2018 11:29:00 AM
These "Would You Still Love Me?" poems are very interesting, Purbasha. Congratulations on your win in Edward's contest. Merry Christmas, Carolyn
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Date: 12/25/2018 8:18:00 PM
Thank you for your kind wishes.Belated Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
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