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Scrolling and scrolling the scripts slipping in seduction of the scene seen or unseen deflection not to mention reflection mirrors don't always appear to be or not to be drastic times call for drastic measures an ideal idiom of sorts depending on who's cause effects the cohorts a false dichotomy on decline no one gets to run or hide even they can't pick a side ________________ I digress as I undress the distress and distraugt being taught but is any of this right why is there always a fight I'd rather spread peace and love not push, not shove so in the shadow of hate I simply wait stripped down and nude join me, would you?

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Date: 7/28/2018 4:26:00 AM
Lovely poem, I enjoyed it......Lekau
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Date: 7/14/2018 10:56:00 AM
I'd rather spread peace and love not push, not shove. I'll join in the spread the word with you. :) Love your verse Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/4/2018 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved POTD honor, Tim. Your poetry is awesome. T.J
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Date: 7/3/2018 2:08:00 AM
I join the sentiment all the way. I like your poem. The line 'to undress the stress' speaks to me in particular. May I use that concept for a poem? Many wishes, Kai
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/3/2018 6:32:00 AM
Have at it Kai. Cheers
Date: 7/2/2018 2:00:00 PM
See am so far behind loll congrats on pots Tim! Smile Brenda
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/3/2018 6:30:00 AM
Smiles and thanks
Date: 7/2/2018 12:37:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD! A great message here... hate seems to be the 1st reaction anymore, or maybe not. It might be the one shown to us the most. :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/3/2018 6:29:00 AM
Thank you Susan
Date: 7/1/2018 5:37:00 PM
Awesome write, Tim! Congrats on POTD, matey
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/1/2018 5:40:00 PM
Thanks Budgie
Date: 7/1/2018 3:04:00 PM
- A lovely meaningful poem, Tim - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. - Count with me :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/1/2018 3:24:00 PM
Thank you A-L
Date: 7/1/2018 1:19:00 PM
I would indeed and with pleasure but not in the shadow of hate. You've managed to make perfect sense of often misused alliteration. Kudos, Tim!!!
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/1/2018 1:20:00 PM
Thank you dearest Lin
Date: 7/1/2018 1:08:00 PM
A profound question indeed. Yet, there is only one true peace, Jesus Christ the prince of peace.
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/1/2018 1:10:00 PM
Thanks Ronald
Date: 7/1/2018 12:11:00 PM
This is a great to call to join the peace movement! Awesome job Tim! And congrats on POTD!
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/1/2018 12:13:00 PM
Thank you James my friend. In these times we need peace and togetherness
Date: 7/1/2018 10:57:00 AM
Thanks Tim but I don't look good naked anymore. Congratulations on POTD honors...
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/1/2018 1:19:00 PM
You two guys are beginning to worry me.
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/1/2018 11:00:00 AM
Haha, well I don't see all that well anymore so you'll be fine...thanks Charlie
Date: 7/1/2018 9:33:00 AM
Giggles, even without this heat wave, sure thang ;) Congrats on potd! xomo
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Date: 7/1/2018 9:36:00 AM
Lol...we are having one as well
Date: 7/1/2018 8:31:00 AM
Such a wonderful message here Tim. I am still blushing with the light touch of humor that lingers within. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 7/1/2018 8:35:00 AM
Thank you Brandy. I do like multiple layers and meaning allowing the reader to take away what they need.
Date: 7/1/2018 7:53:00 AM
Congrats!!! Timmy on your POTD!...I like naked lol...hey! Toga party lol...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 7/1/2018 7:56:00 AM
Thank you WW...I'll bring the sunscreen
Date: 7/1/2018 7:12:00 AM
This is cleverly written Tim and so beautiful.It echoes my own sentiments. A well deserved POTD.
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Date: 7/1/2018 7:26:00 AM
Thank you Sylvia. I am pleasantly surprised that others agree with my point of view.
Date: 7/1/2018 6:59:00 AM
Oops, such a lovely poem this is, especially the message, I would rather spread peace and love, but you have certainly shown a new way to spread it, by getting naked, lol, I really enjoyed reading this poem of yours and it certainly keeps me smiling, many congratulations on your poem being chosen as POTD, good luck and have a nice day
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Date: 7/1/2018 7:25:00 AM
Thank you Faraz. Naked is a metaphor for bearing of insecurities
Date: 7/1/2018 3:44:00 AM
You pulled out all the stops with this one Tim... many congrats on a very well deserved POTD. I especially love " I digress as I undress the distress and distraugt being taught but is any of this right why is there always a fight " it has a tongue twister flow to it' and great alliteration throughout the poem , into my faves:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/1/2018 7:23:00 AM
Thanks Jan. I was surprised. You know me and my alliteration lol
Date: 7/1/2018 1:01:00 AM
With pleasure, in the shadow to "spread peace and love..." - just the place to face happyness. Great work, Tim, excited
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/1/2018 7:23:00 AM
Thank you Valentina
Date: 6/30/2018 10:11:00 PM
Tim, your poem reminds me of an old saying, "If everyone was the same, then grandma never would have married grandpa." That is why "there is always a fight" A different opinion should lead to conversation but when it comes to politics it always leads to name calling and finger pointing. i love how you wrote this:)
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/1/2018 7:22:00 AM
Exactly my friend. There needs to be more conversation. Thanks DT
Date: 6/30/2018 9:23:00 PM
I might add I enjoyed the depth and message of the poem, this is also a fav for me!
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/1/2018 7:21:00 AM
Thanks again Art
Date: 6/30/2018 8:20:00 PM
Oh my!!! Such a fun, creative and clever write indeed. I am smiling and blushing all at the same time. :) Brandy
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Date: 7/1/2018 7:21:00 AM
Thanks Brandy :)
Date: 6/30/2018 7:48:00 PM
Umm hell yea lmao! Loved this Tim you do know how to keep one coming back don't you?!! Lol really a great write my friend! Hugs Brenda
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Date: 7/1/2018 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Brenda
Date: 6/30/2018 4:11:00 PM
Very passionate, and this reminds me even a song I listened to recently! Now I gotta go take a cold shower!!! LOL
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/30/2018 4:16:00 PM
Lol
Date: 6/30/2018 3:54:00 PM
an invitation like that an you are going to have a great big party. lol. great flow and vocab to your poetry, keep spreading the love ;)
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/30/2018 3:56:00 PM
Thanks Cas...I'll throw some ice in the pool