Carolyn Devonshire Poet Rhyme

Would That I Could

If only for a moment, I’d like to enjoy your smile again
You could have been the fourth of three wise men
In cloud formations I sometimes see your face
My heart grows heavy as past joys I trace

Surely you’re playing baseball with the angels today
Yet I long for you, Dad, as I clasp my hands to pray
When I hear others bemoan the deeds their fathers did
I remember all the strife that from your children you hid

So often I view the video made for your ninetieth birthday
The struggles of a hard life it will always convey
But you gave your children far more than you ever had
It’s with pride I still boast, “I had the greatest Dad”

Would that I could go back in time once more
To say, “I love you,” to a father I’ll always adore



*Written April 19, 2013

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Quoth Theraven October 19, 2019 at 10:39 AM Carolyn, This is a very thoughtful poem for your Dad. 'When I hear others bemoan the deeds their fathers did I remember all the strife that from your children you hid'. I feel as though I've disturbed a private conversation not meant for my eyes or ears. -Richard Carolyn Devonshire October 21, 2019 at 3:33 PM Thanks, Richard. I've always known I was blessed with a terrific father and wish everyone had such a role model.

Linda Jackson April 23, 2014 at 2:36 PM Your poem brought a lump to my throat. Brilliant. Best wishes Linda

Audrey Haick April 20, 2014 at 10:15 PM This true gem is one for saving to one's favs., Carolyn! This is special! Lots of love, Audrey

Barbara Gorelick April 20, 2014 at 2:51 PM Its so nice to see your name popping up again. Nice bit of homage to your dad. How are you? BG

Casarah Nance April 20, 2014 at 8:24 AM awws. thanks for sharing :) Hugs. what a wonderful memorial

Tim Smith April 19, 2014 at 12:59 PM Your Dad would be grinning ear to ear and boasting with pride that he has the greatest daughter. Splendid write Carolyn...hugs Tim Carolyn Devonshire April 19, 2014 at 1:12 PM Dear Tim, I did my best, but surely I hold no record for being the greatest daughter. I could only offer him my love. thank you for your sweet comment.